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RexHarris
RexHarrisLv143yr
2021-04-09 13:01

The story is fairly interesting but is ruined for me by a few things. The first big thing is the fact that the system brainwashes the people he pairs with into liking him. Its strange and kreepy when it is shown. The next is that the mc is a bit of a kreep as well to me. The Translation is also poor and there are also gramatic errors littered in. Lastly the way the novel describes and deals with cultivation is wierd and confusing.

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Liger01
Liger01Lv6

Actually it creates sense of familiarity. Meaning if someone hated you and you binded to them, they would still hate you they would just feel like they know you. I don't understand how the MC is a creep though.

Muspon
MusponLv13

its just how the author is he is a good author with his flaws but he won't ever become a better author all of his novels have really great ideas but he never develops them past being good. all of his previous novels are 7-8 out of 10 its good but not great

RexHarris
RexHarrisLv14

What else has he writen

Muspon:its just how the author is he is a good author with his flaws but he won't ever become a better author all of his novels have really great ideas but he never develops them past being good. all of his previous novels are 7-8 out of 10 its good but not great
Master_Celestial
Master_CelestialLv4

https://***.novelupdates.com/nauthor/li-hongtian/

RexHarris:What else has he writen
Master_Celestial
Master_CelestialLv4

Gourmet in another world and building the ultimate fantasy.

RexHarris:What else has he writen
RexHarris
RexHarrisLv14

I have read some of gourmet but not the other, Thanks.

Master_Celestial:Gourmet in another world and building the ultimate fantasy.
Master_Celestial
Master_CelestialLv4

Youβ€˜re welcome :)

RexHarris:I have read some of gourmet but not the other, Thanks.
Biologist
BiologistLv6

Building The Ultimate Fantasy sadly stoped releasing new chapters.

Swiftescape
SwiftescapeLv15

Unfortunate. So the author skips the work of actually making the mc put in the effort into his targets liking him. What lazy writing, this could have been one of the conflicts in the story that would've been interesting to see. But, unfortunately these authors like to take the easy and short path in writing.

RexHarris
RexHarrisLv14

Yes unfortunately he doesnt even have to interact with them to start sharing their talents, he got his first one just by telling the system there name

Swiftescape:Unfortunate. So the author skips the work of actually making the mc put in the effort into his targets liking him. What lazy writing, this could have been one of the conflicts in the story that would've been interesting to see. But, unfortunately these authors like to take the easy and short path in writing.
Divine_univers
Divine_universLv15

I don't believe the cultivation is that confusing in terms of how it's listed like a lot of other cultivation novels it's nine levels per class/realm.Only thing I need cleared up in that regard is what is considered far into the path of cultivation in this novel

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