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Aeipathy_02
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This quite an interesting read. Now review proper, Writing Quality - There are a bit some g-errors but it didn't hinder me from reading the whole story much. Stability of updates- I see no problem here. Story Development- First it start-off with quite an interesting start from the grimmers. Then the intro of the main male lead is also just right. They're a bit, showing a glimpse of his past about his parents and make me really curious about this. There is also some mention of the academy, I wonder if there will be some magic or supernatural academy trope here? That would be more interesting in my opinion. Character Design: The description of the mc, from his thoughts, you could already quite capture what kind of person he is, and from the incoming chaps, I know this would develop better. As for the others character, they have already some district traits to differentiate each of them and will be remembered by the readers so keep up with this. World background: I could see that the author has already planned out everything for this, so I got no problems with this. Overall this is already a great read with lots of potentials! Keep it up, author!

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Grimoire: Atonement of Souls

Gaurav Kumar

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Shianne_De_Kock
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Now this is a review! 🙂

GauravKumar
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Thank you ☺️ Glad to know my character's liked. Having him be this quirk was a gamble but glad to know it worked. As for the thing about the academy plot... I can neither confirm nor deny...yet :D