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Poolitzer
PoolitzerLv64yr
2021-02-16 19:55

writing quality is good. now the negativ. there is no world building, character progress or story design. author does not descripe the world, the characters or the adventure. everything is a summary! example: he just uses names for characters and puts them there. no explaining who who is, what does people do or anything. they are just names that pop up once and vanish without knowing anything about them. his world is not build. he did read the OG then assumes we all do parallel to his story and jumps around explains nothing and skips anx and all explanation and world building. ergo: read the OG story or you wont understand this one. the question is now: why even read this ff? nothing knew just worse and some other mc. not worth the read.

WARLOCK OF THE MAGUS WORLD FAN FICTION (Rewrite)

Keetarp
4.4
490 Chs

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fish1234
fish1234Lv14

then quit the ff man,this ff is for us WMW fans

4yr
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leylin_slytherin
leylin_slytherinLv4

@fish1234 I concur

4yr
Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv4

Then you are a bad fan if you disrespect WMW with this crap.

fish1234:then quit the ff man,this ff is for us WMW fans
4yr
10
Chonchonm
ChonchonmLv11

I believe this fanfic is written under the assumption that the readers would've already read the original wotmw since this was under the category of "fan fiction"

4yr
1
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VictorRust2410
VictorRust2410Lv3

This was an enjoyable fic for the first twenty five or so chapters. The grammar suddenly improved in the middle of the story which was great and the author said he would be diverging from cannon pretty soon, so i was really looking forward to this. unfortunately, this fic went from promising to boring pretty fast. I was starting to enjoy the fic when Bloodbath arc happened. the mc transformed from cold cannon leylin to an anime hero. he decides to start playing with his opponents and suddenly develops feelings for a character he had only slept with once, and even that non-seriously. if you want the mc to behave like a love-struck fool atleast pick a better character than bicky who is being banged by another guy, for f*cks sake! as for the plot, the less said the better. it's literally a copy of the original without any changes. its fine to follow canon in the start but when a fanfic follows the same plot like original even after 50 chapters? yeah, the dude's delusional to call himself an author. he literally copy pasted entire paragraphs from the original fic, I'm not even exaggerating cause i double checked it. the only reason it's even gaining any readers is due to the fact that it's the only serious wmw fanfic right now. maybe I'm being too harsh and the dude's just writing for his own pleasure then as a serious fic, but it hurts to see so much potential vanish like this.

4yr

DaoOfDao
DaoOfDaoLv4

2 chapters in and MC uses 3 girls who were “appreciative of him” to destress himself. They were “full of smiles” after and MC responded with a “helpless smile”. It was only a paragraph but it showed me that MC is shallow and a mansl*t. That he would sleep with any women that shows interest of him. Mistreats women unlike OG Leylin. No intricate relationship and if there would be one in the future, it would seem forced. I hate these kinds of MC so I dropped. Disappointed as I thought MC would have a more calm and practical outlook, but he acts wantonly. That since there is no Harem Tag, there would be more delving into the world. I don’t know if it would get better plot-wise but the story didn’t interest me anymore after reading that passage. I didn’t like the MC but I can’t say the same for you. So go read and give this a try since this is the first Warock in the Magis World fanfic I saw on this site.

4yr
Vaassaav
VaassaavLv5

As the author I think world of magus is one of the best novel Really happy to see a fic, hope u not gonna drop 👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👍👍👌👌👍👍👌👌👍👍👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

4yr
Movezbatch
MovezbatchLv4

No title No synopsis No explanation at all except saying it's best Why would anyone bother reading this when the author didn't bother informing us about fanfic

4yr
Guad
GuadLv6

If you didn’t read the OG novel, don’t even bother with this work... The author assumes that you know what he’s talking about, and keeps summarizing events, without introducing new characters, describing them, or setting up said events. This won’t feel like a fan-fic to someone unfamiliar with WMW, but more like a fan-summary with some twists... The least you could do is slow down, start actually introducing characters and setting up events by actually leading up to them... This is a review as of chapter 15 hopefully the rest is somewhat better and new reader friendly.

4yr
8Eight
8EightLv3

I Wes kinda excited about a wmw fanfic, but this is not a story. It's a summary or a documentation. And has none of the charm the original story had. Combined with poor grammar and no descriptions it's honestly pretty awful Ive read most of wmw and I still think the "author" is power phrasing too much. Whatever, dont read it what a disappointment

4yr
Callacous_3007
Callacous_3007Lv4

This is an amazing book..... everyone must give it a try. Author ji is amazing person to release many chapters daily.... there is no bullshit or nonsensical thing done by MC or any other characters.

4yr
Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv4

After 20 chapters, the plot is pretty much the same as canon, with a few differences that are not relevant to the plot. The differences are e.g he fucks this girl, or he gets an extra slave. Basically, nothing of worth is different. Dissapointing!

4yr
Lord_Leylin
Lord_LeylinLv5

Haven't read it yet but this is the first warlock of the magus world fanfic I've seen, hence this deserves all 5, 5 stars. Here's to a great fanfic.

4yr
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