good storryyyyyy mannn,thee mc develops relationship with the girls first then bang them,not like some novels mc just a sec later born from his mother and womb he magical grows 9 inch dick and kalal sharingan and all that, KEPPP UP THE HOOD WORK MAN , as a man of culture we support ******, netori, harem heheh,but pelz bro dont add lesbian or yuri content just saying my opinion only, and dooo a masss release....

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Truthfully The writing quality is bad. Since the author is writing only as a hobby I won't be too harsh. The plot isn't good it contains a few plotholes and since writing quality is bad it's hard to sometimes make out what the author wants to say. Character description is subpar. No updates stability since the author writes when he has time. World Background - Other than a general overview it's blank I would say. And author doesn't read the comments so don't put an effort to mention typos.

Everything is good so far, I say so far since there wasn’t enough chaps to actually judge it good. I just wanna give ideas, don’t make the mother be a very easy capture, he is still her son, she took care of him since he was a child so there is bound to be complications when he abruptly changes his view on her, just take it slow. The big sister, perfect, couldn’t have done that better, lil sis, perfect, reminds me of ‘Little rascal doesn’t want to meet a bad end’. Make him do exercise early on, but not to the level where after a year timeskip, he can destroy mountains, that’s stupid, just enough to get him going. Don’t make this guy rely on his system all the time, since you wrote that he is a straight A student then he should be pretty smart, and people who are good at chess are very good at tactics and split second decision making so you can make use of that. When he starts his first se.x scene, take advantage of the fact that he has watch a lot of **** and hentai that he knows how to pleasure women even though he is a virgin, I already tried that, and I was glad I spent a couple of hours watching po.rn and hen.tai. Don’t let him be a pushover, It’s kinda weird being a harem protagonist while you’re being dominated in bed. 100 chaps is too long for a se.x scene, just do timeskip dude.

please dont drop it, i like the story so far. but there is no ch. R-18 yet, so i hope you make it. like the MC with his slave or any other woman, just make the MC playing punisment game, shower together, some touching while sleeping together. just make some innocent move please.

I love this novel. Story, characters, setting etc are entertaining and plot moves at a good pace. I see comments about Author allegedly plagiarizing some others words. Frankly I did not notice any of that. Perhaps author can comment about being inspired by the various sources and encourage readers to check out the source work. Author san, please do not let this stop you from continuing your work. We are looking forward to see how this story ends and how protagonist keeps harem all together ultimately.

I really liked this novel ..don't drop it author .. some say whatever they want about the novel but it is one the best stories with good characters ..do keep up the good work

This novel is one of the few good ones out there. I have been following it for quite a long time and I have to say although there is mistake in grammar here and there it still puts the point forward. I saw that few of the authors of other novel are Saying he copied their novels and I don't really see where though, if its just the lewd scenes that's although kinda bad but its not something irredeemable. So author-san really love your novel don't worry about those people and continue your work.

It is an amazing work, sure the author has made mistakes but that is part of being human and he fixed them and apologized, ignore the self-righteous salty whiners who act as if they haven't messed up before and continue to beat a dead horse. They only decided to complain in the reviews after it was put back up(after fixing the mistakes), showing signs of cancel culture which I am sure most people are sick of.