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This FanFic is very good. I just started reading the first 4 chapters, and I can already tell it's exciting. The plot is very cool and I would like to see more of its development. Keep it up my g !! Looking for more content to come !!

The story has a fantastic writing style. I hope we can see more stories like these that have a great story plot. I hope the author continues to write great stories like this <3

Alright so, this is a good story but with glaring mistakes mc is weak as **** even though he has mastered the most advanced form of haki as one should know that in order to master haki you need a very powerful body. Apart from that since he already has a strOng physique (as he has mastered haki) he should have no problem with mastering his devil fruit as it reqUires stamina, we also saw that when blackbeard got tremble tremble fruit he instantly was able to use it to its full power. yes i agree that awakening the fruit is not Easy as it requires one to be familiar with their fruit. However even without awaking his fruit or eveN without his devil fruit just based on his Haki alone he should be able to fight an Admiral. Yes he may not be able to win duE to his lack of experience but fight them on an equal footing should be of no problem specially sCinCe he has master emission haki. After all in one piEce the hIgh level battle are all about haki and devil fruit are just for support pUrPoses as we Saw in the fight between whitebeard and roger. So anyways i felt that author has some serious lack of understanding about the anime But apart from that the character design of the mc was great 👍 as well as the whole training arc i enjoyed those But then it went downHill as it did not make sense for the mc to be so weak Also for a mythical zoAn his devil fruit was specially weak In fact Robin’s devil fruit seemed much stronger as she did not have any limitations on the number of hands the devil friit Could grow amd also we saw her Use the devil fruit to create Giant legs which could stomp entire armys. So again some serious work needed on the devil fruit... ... would suggest the auther to google AshuRa in Indian mythology as it will give him a loT of ideas. Thats all, hope you do a Rewrite as Your idea has a lot of potential as long as you fiX the obvious mistakes.

I'll start by talking about what I thought of this fanfic so far. The beginning of the story was good, the protagonist presented himself as an intelligent person and with a strategic mind, but little by little he changed and became more stupid and noisy, like the typical MC shonen. Another thing I didn't like about this fanfic is the fact that the author gave the protagonist an Akuma no Mi of the Mythic Zoan type where in theory he should transform the user into an Asura, but the only thing she does is to grow more arms, none special ability or physical transformation that we all know that an Akuma no Mi of the Zoan Mythic type has, because in all Akuma no Mi of the Zoan type a type of physical transformation in the user, be it a hybrid or total form, in addition, all Akuma no Mi of the Mythic Zoan type have a special ability, for example, the admiral of the Sengoku fleet in his Buddha form has the ability to generate shock waves with his palms and Marco of the Whitebeard pirates has flames that are capable of healing the user, Akuma no Mi appears to be of Paramecia type instead of Zoan type, the author suggested that a big change will occur when awakening happens, but to use Akuma no Mi’s hybrid or full transformation skills isn’t n It is necessary to be in the state of Upon awakening, by the way, this Akuma no Mi chosen for the protagonist is very impractical, because the greater the number of arms the slower the MC is, there is also the fact that the arms that come out from the back have a range smaller than the main arms, since the created limbs do not extend, unless opponents attack from behind for the rest of the things there are few advantages, it would have been better not to have given MC an Akuma no Mi if it were so, nor has the excuse of running out of time, since the protagonist has eaten Akuma no Mi for years, in all these years has he never seen another skill besides growing more hands? I don't think it's possible. Anyway this fanfic is not to my liking, but I will give 4 stars to motivate the author, because it is not easy to write a story. Sorry for any grammatical errors, I am writing this through the Google translator.

the novel is one long talk no jutsu , the interaction is incredibly dull and unbelievable . the stories concept is cool and I cant hate on one piece so ill give it a decent rating. good luck on the rest of the novel author

it's pretty good..... . and this fanfic has its own story line/original plot... which makes it more interesting... . overall its light hearted fic

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Okay my review so far, i like your novel its very interesting and have a lot of potential so keep it up 👍🏻. Now i would suggest that you make the chapter a bit more detailed to make it a bit longer so it would be more filling, other than that like i said its a good novel and im looking forward for more amazing chapters 😁😁