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Only up to chapter 9 but I have already have two major problems with this story.... The mc was stated to not have any friends so he was a very isolated individual. He was like Shikamaru in the fact he was a genius and read/watched clouds every day. This was like the first impression we get of the mc. Then suddenly out of nowhere, it all went out the window. It's like the author made him a completely new character. A very upbeat individual who shouts a lot and is a little stupid. Trying to make the mc like roger I guess? I don't have a problem with this type of character however, the fact that the first impression of him was just so vastly different just rly destroys the story. Like what happens if the author decides he doesn't like this type of personality in the future and does a 180 again... We will always be asking questions cause it has already happened once so it will prob happen again. The other thing that annoys me is the author's liberal use of capital letters. It is just way too jarring to read. If you want us to know that he is speaking loudly, shouting or whatever you use ! I mean that is the whole fcking point of them... Oh yeah, not rly a problem per se but why tf does he need two swords and guns? I mean that's just way too much no? It should be one gun and one sword or two swords in each hand or two guns instead. There is literally no upsides to having two of each weapon. If he had more hands then yeah but he only has two... Sry but this just doesn't make sense to me... It's like... say he is fighting someone and has both swords in his hands. He wants to use his gun but fck how can he? He would need to sheath one of his swords and reach for his gun. Same if it was the other way around. But if he does this he would just be asking to get destroyed by the opponent... One second in a fight can mean everything. They only feasible way he could fight with them all is if he threw them to the ground when he needs to change. This thou has massive downsides of say what happens if he needs to use it again? He can't because he threw it to the ground... and then is he going to just throw his weapons to the ground every time? No matter how you put it, it just makes absolutely no sense...

This FanFic is very good. I just started reading the first 4 chapters, and I can already tell it's exciting. The plot is very cool and I would like to see more of its development. Keep it up my g !! Looking for more content to come !!

The story has a fantastic writing style. I hope we can see more stories like these that have a great story plot. I hope the author continues to write great stories like this <3

I'll start by talking about what I thought of this fanfic so far. The beginning of the story was good, the protagonist presented himself as an intelligent person and with a strategic mind, but little by little he changed and became more stupid and noisy, like the typical MC shonen. Another thing I didn't like about this fanfic is the fact that the author gave the protagonist an Akuma no Mi of the Mythic Zoan type where in theory he should transform the user into an Asura, but the only thing she does is to grow more arms, none special ability or physical transformation that we all know that an Akuma no Mi of the Zoan Mythic type has, because in all Akuma no Mi of the Zoan type a type of physical transformation in the user, be it a hybrid or total form, in addition, all Akuma no Mi of the Mythic Zoan type have a special ability, for example, the admiral of the Sengoku fleet in his Buddha form has the ability to generate shock waves with his palms and Marco of the Whitebeard pirates has flames that are capable of healing the user, Akuma no Mi appears to be of Paramecia type instead of Zoan type, the author suggested that a big change will occur when awakening happens, but to use Akuma no Mi’s hybrid or full transformation skills isn’t n It is necessary to be in the state of Upon awakening, by the way, this Akuma no Mi chosen for the protagonist is very impractical, because the greater the number of arms the slower the MC is, there is also the fact that the arms that come out from the back have a range smaller than the main arms, since the created limbs do not extend, unless opponents attack from behind for the rest of the things there are few advantages, it would have been better not to have given MC an Akuma no Mi if it were so, nor has the excuse of running out of time, since the protagonist has eaten Akuma no Mi for years, in all these years has he never seen another skill besides growing more hands? I don't think it's possible. Anyway this fanfic is not to my liking, but I will give 4 stars to motivate the author, because it is not easy to write a story. Sorry for any grammatical errors, I am writing this through the Google translator.

the novel is one long talk no jutsu , the interaction is incredibly dull and unbelievable . the stories concept is cool and I cant hate on one piece so ill give it a decent rating. good luck on the rest of the novel author

it's pretty good..... . and this fanfic has its own story line/original plot... which makes it more interesting... . overall its light hearted fic

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Okay my review so far, i like your novel its very interesting and have a lot of potential so keep it up 👍🏻. Now i would suggest that you make the chapter a bit more detailed to make it a bit longer so it would be more filling, other than that like i said its a good novel and im looking forward for more amazing chapters 😁😁