Review Detail of KillingmeSoftly in Warlock of the Magus World – Redux
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Author are you going to dig deep in the power of the laws cause in the original we didn't get to see the full extent of the powers of sin so are going to make changes so that we get to see leylin and the magus alliance use their laws to their full potential?
Warlock of the Magus World – Redux
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Don't worry, I share your grievances toward the original in that regard. I plan to solve those issues, once we eventually reach that part of the story.
TheComedy_Mask:well i just hope that he would get rid of those women after there use is over and doesn't bring every women he finds like when he brought back those three women from the shadow world one of them had oure blood the other two were just useless i think it's useless and stulpidto even let them live as well as that snake dowager i mean he was an ant to her but he defeated doesn't that mean she has fair chance kf getting revenge in the future even more then him when tricked her
TunaSandwichAddict:Remember I wont change major ocurrences in plot. However, I will strive to make fights and cultivation more interesting, and be sure that Ill make Leylin abuse his power ONLY whe it is safe for him to do so.
TheComedy_Mask:will take keep the romance in it or his marriage
well i just hope that he would get rid of those women after there use is over and doesn't bring every women he finds like when he brought back those three women from the shadow world one of them had oure blood the other two were just useless i think it's useless and stulpidto even let them live as well as that snake dowager i mean he was an ant to her but he defeated doesn't that mean she has fair chance kf getting revenge in the future even more then him when tricked her
TunaSandwichAddict:romance no, marriage yes
thanks lot men your the goat to be honest I planning on rewriting birth of the demonic sword in summer if no does it and am planning on making him truly evil and not an idiot who will do what girl tell's him just because she keeps yelling and following him i would've killed her let alone help or give her an inheritance so if do write it i will make make deal with royals to get bunch darkness spells rather then giving it to jane
TunaSandwichAddict:Don't worry, I share your grievances toward the original in that regard. I plan to solve those issues, once we eventually reach that part of the story.