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Aaron_McLeod_1690Lv153yr
2021-10-01 09:18

the poor english writing quality, paired with the authors stereotypical protagonist and basic character design (along with a large amount of deus ex machina) makes for a poor reading experience. the MC might have redeeming qualities, but you cannot tell between the constant grammatical errors and extreme changes the author forces in each chapter.

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Haroldtigre
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Yes, that's a pretty good thing to point out. I am not that good at English yet. I will fix them in near future.

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