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Eliza993
Eliza993Lv43yr
2021-09-10 18:15

This story has a funny/gag theme. The idea is interesting. However, I dislike the mc's stupidity and the mage's mental issue. It is hard to look at them.

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Haroldtigre
HaroldtigreLv2

I appreciate the honest review. I just made them like that. Hope the character development fixes that.

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