So far this book is good. i love reading this book so much. Author is publishing chapter in consistency. The character is damn cool. i wounder how the story will go.

Legible writing, although not perfect. Interesting storyline, with no flaws found so far. His system is not instantaneous OP, although I feel frustrated in his place to see sss rank abilities and cannot be extracted. The only problem I encounter in this story is the low number of chapters and the relatively slow release rate. The fact that the chapter is not very big also only worsens this delay.

It reads more like a chinese fantasy novel. If it werent for some of the names being guys from One Piece you wouldnt actually know it was One Piece.

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Not the best translation but still readable. And the story looks interesting so far. How Do I Post Reviews Under 140 Letters How Do I Post Reviews Under 140 Letters

The story is fine. The power is a fun one and I usually like reading books with Copy ability. The only issue I have is, please stop having Stone say "Cunt" every single time he opens his mouth. At times it is okay, but he is constantly saying it as if there is no tomorrow, it's kind of annoying to read. Anyway, with that being said, I would say the grammar is fine enough for a Fanfic, although it could improve a bit, to this end I would suggest Grammarly, since it is totally free. If the novel is translated, I would beg the translator to leave behind the word Cunt when translating. :D

i found the system interesting, the grammar is good. But, there is thing that are not in the one piece universe (the sword intent and aura bullshit), the mc is (like in chinese novel) a proud guy who enjoy humiliating is opponent, and the reaction of the other character feel... empty (like in almost every chinese novel)