Damn sad. the idea is dope, the character has everything to be dope, unexplored characters are used, and even races, power is cool but its all shitty CD, WD, and any and all relationships are just passed of as plot and wish ability and not build in the slightest. the first love interest just has *** with the MC in less than an hr of meeting. The world isnt explored. characters like morgan and authur are here, fae's, like shit, its new so nice, very nice...but isnt explored. just mentioned, theres more focus on the ***....literally [ unless changed ]. the characters meet, oh u are merlin incarnation I trust, i fk u, have everything [ the MC has a ' protag ability ' and thats exactly why its shitty CD ] the MC has zero CD or development and just a bland collector. damn sad it smut, and badly done that. it was dope in the start
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LIKEits before cannon, MC is an experiment and MC make akuja formula, dope..but thats all, every relationship, friends or otherwise is not developed [ shown ] and just rushed. And the women so far are just sluts. not a derogatory way, literal sluts, even the first love interest.
i think it's more of a gag FF than a serious one....
yay...gag, whatever...shitty CD is shitty CD. so not sure it matters. also the author bothered to write a decent length and has a proper base but executed badly. if u by chance are a fan of it, and are trying to defend it, Idc ...wank off to it or something. lol. lets not waste each others time
Antigonus_99:i think it's more of a gag FF than a serious one....
Welp thanks for reviewing though
amaturewriter:yay...gag, whatever...shitty CD is shitty CD. so not sure it matters. also the author bothered to write a decent length and has a proper base but executed badly. if u by chance are a fan of it, and are trying to defend it, Idc ...wank off to it or something. lol. lets not waste each others time
Yeah even the smut itself was trash.
I feel like your taking this book to seriously.(never Read dxd light novel nor watched Past the animation changes) this is more like a joke series for fun the protagonist isnt crazy op. When things seem rapped up It’ll jump to the next universe
I feel like you are taking this review and bk too seriously, seeing as your bothering to defend a non serious bk. and review that just stated my thoughts dont take things so seriously
conwall:I feel like your taking this book to seriously.(never Read dxd light novel nor watched Past the animation changes) this is more like a joke series for fun the protagonist isnt crazy op. When things seem rapped up It’ll jump to the next universe
Yo, the self-proclaimed the best the best smut authors in the whole web novel community. Low, there.
GhostyZ:Yeah even the smut itself was trash.
I mean your smut is not much better despite how much you brag about it. you wana see good smut then look up Cambrian
GhostyZ:Yeah even the smut itself was trash.
Naw he does NTR I don't read or write cuck novels like cambrian.
Fellbane:I mean your smut is not much better despite how much you brag about it. you wana see good smut then look up Cambrian
it doesn't change that's better than yours tough
GhostyZ:Naw he does NTR I don't read or write cuck novels like cambrian.
Anything that has NTR in it, is automatically worse than every vanilla smut in existence. (And almost any smut category)
venomwave:it doesn't change that's better than yours tough
Lmao cucklord worshipper
venomwave:it doesn't change that's better than yours tough
NTR(netori) is fine for me, what is not fine for me is NTR(netorare) but yeah Cambrian is still a better smut writer than you
GhostyZ:Naw he does NTR I don't read or write cuck novels like cambrian.
Plus the sometimes netorare smut that he writes is commisioned but somebody else, it's not like anybody is going to refuse anybody paying them to write smut(be it something as deplorable as netorare or not)
GhostyZ:Naw he does NTR I don't read or write cuck novels like cambrian.
I make more money than him without writing Netorare...
Endless_Suffering:Plus the sometimes netorare smut that he writes is commisioned but somebody else, it's not like anybody is going to refuse anybody paying them to write smut(be it something as deplorable as netorare or not)
I said 'who will reject money to write smut' not how much money you made compared to him
GhostyZ:I make more money than him without writing Netorare...
Interesting ... although in his patreon he shows a monthly income of 4k, from what I remember yours was not even close ....
GhostyZ:I make more money than him without writing Netorare...
DoctorLin:Interesting ... although in his patreon he shows a monthly income of 4k, from what I remember yours was not even close ....
GhostyZ:Yeah even the smut itself was trash.
