Review Detail of Ashborn2271 in Marvel: Psychomimetic

Its a it to fast paced. you should take ur time to write it, there are too many plot holes ex the mindscape creation how or what fid you do there. The whole technology thing is a bit weird it seems like your only adding things after you have some idea without any background to them, like u write a chapter but later decide to add something new to it but dont have a strong reason for it to be there