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I posted a link to the Fandom Discord Server Rather than the one for my fanfic However you can still join both. One is meant to be bigger than the other One is just for my small fanfiction community
1. The many bracketed thoughts were unnecessary. You could do the Author's Notes after the entire chapter. 2. I don't know if it's because I translated it but the chapter is too jam packed 3. Also yes, the powers are too much. The best formula for a Fanfiction is to 1. Have an idea of how you want the story to end 2. Pick one superpower... Overpowered or not... It should be impactful meaning it should be powerful but flexible. Meaning you can use it for all you want without anyone complaining at some point
At least bro says it plainly
At that point, it's more of a coma than a death They state it that he is alive hut they had no idea how to actually bring him back to functional state The mauler twins was simply trying their luck and it worked
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The Guardians limited their genetic potential not their technological potential They are still very much on per with Kryptonians in terms of technology The difference is that theirs hasn't been explored as much
If you are complaining about him not shaking the ancient one then you may be mistaken a bit The MCU Ancient one m is implied to be as old as Thor who is 1500 years old or possibly older because Odin references her Now she is also a woman who has scoured through time in ways, even Strange hasn't... Stopped her own death multiple times as she tells strange until that absolute point being the hospital scene. Now, she is also a powerful sorcerer who even Odin acknowledges... Mental arts would be basic to her So now mix multiple timeline views, mind reading, thousands of years of forgetton knowledge and lost time lines... That's the ancient one Compared to 200 years (Logan) Jean Grey (20 years) Xavier at max (500 years) None of them at this point in their lives had met anything with memories in the thousands of years MC could barely handle the minimum output from the Celestial ship and Ship was actively limiting what he could get meaning he only got around 1.2% of its thousands of years worth of knowledge Now he wants to absorb knowledge from someone who can't limit it and has knowledge going back (or forwards) billions of years due to her use of the time stone What do you think would happen?
Yes but even that fact came from President Superman He lost his powers and is still able to lift up to a ton or two under duress Also Clark has proven that his abilities are sort of tied to his mental state. He has flown in front of a red star that was surrounded by kryptonite asteroids before. So it's best to say that his weaknesses only work when the author wants it to
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He did but he was careless against her