Still he needs 1000 point to upgrade from f rank meaning 1 point a day equals to 1000 days for the lowest rank

Is there a difference in this and the mtl fic, doesn’t seem like there is any same story plot and charecter, next she’s going to act as Jorel did nothing wrong and get killed, question is author are u copying this if so plz tell because I came here hoping it would be different from the original mtl novel

Author san isnt this a mtl as far as I know there is one similar to this, so question is what is the difference or does it even have a difference

His ability is gift every month unique skills which he can choose and specify a type off, he runs away from Gotham, okay but to study and later enlist in the army, my god what a way to ruin things, he wants to hide from everyone but joining the military is to help people when he earns around 500 million in 1 month yup the mc is very stupid and too OP I wouldnt recommend’ this to anyone looking for a gradualally getting powerful mc, the whole joining the military was a waste of time, the mc seems to waste time when he knows he’s in DC seriously what will school and military do in DC verse. Try at your own risk.

Question is will u continue this beyond the doll gamer fic or not??

Honestly if I were him I would shout out to haunter about Agatha’s plan for it let’s see what she can do about it. Sorry author the whole fic is going down for me, I really did like the idea of EM but the charecter know is just plain stupid

It’ all over the place there is no sense in the plot no understanding of the mcs ability and skills to random, theres no planning charecter is fake as hell, act stupid and most of the reviews are being rewritten by same people more then 10 times uhhhh wouldn’t recommend this to anyone author you need to restart this from the beginning it doesn’t make much sense.

It’ getting forced honestly first oak then green and out of the blue here’ s agatha blaming and forcing him as bait, sure the mc is also acting too much of an idiot when he should be a top ranker top3 of the year, honestly it’ like EM does nothing for the mcs memory and knowledge, it’ becoming a mess to me, the middle onwards in this chapters was beyond me, honetly most of his secret knowledge is being used for others first leaf and now Agatha

Guys do you have a link for this story??

Heard you author, I mean to us it seems leaf is a professor while the mc is ash he literally knows nothing, at least not much more then ash. Okay will wait for the whole plot hole you made in the author note, but seriously leaf is a bit too bossy on mc. Still thanks for the update

I have read a fic similar to this on fanfiction are u the same author though? Overall it’ modern technology in old times

He’s being forced to much he should have a backbone the idea of EM was amazing but giving it to others was rediculous, please change this if you can it seems to forced, adding romance to the Pokémon world especially in the beginning is just wrong, just separate the whole bond and sharing em with leaf

Does it have a syst em

I honestly thought he would say the kingdom of dragon, the emperor of the east, CHINA NUMBA ONE 😂

Not much to say except that the story has a lot of chapters, can’t really tell much of the quality as the story is locked after 3 chapters, similarly not much known about the characters design and world background not worth reading unless you want to pay first to understand if the story is worth it but still the idea itself is uniqe and new,

Most likely related to obito or bijuu chakra according to origin world

I think u can find it on Mtl nation

I like the character of lockheart very similar to the original one hopefully he gets the girl he’s after most hopefully lily, doesn’t seem any other are worth his time with the charecter he displays. Very arrogant and young master type attitude, but hopefully you can show some manner in which he exploits the muggle world too at least in the aspects of money and gold with the use of gold, but overall I would say anyone looking for a cool mc who likes to keep secrets and isn’t to OP at the beginning to try this story

Nice chapter seemed very realistic

It’s very suspicious that the Mito doesn’t transfer the kyuubi to her grandson or even to another senju child but to an uzumaki what a hypocrite