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DaoistguHJvl
DaoistguHJvlLv13yr
2021-09-15 14:03

****Spoiler alert **** I love what you do with your characters and how you writing makes me want to read your stories angain and again. My only complaint is that you are shifting tge perspectives without any disclaimers of what/who are we supposed to assume the perspective of. I would also know the background of the characters as they seem so much more then what the appear to be like, how summerset, the supposed rapist turned into the good noble all respect deeply, how glenna and summerset 1st met and how they fell for each other, how Ana who did not have the interest of marriage between Glenna and summerset - to - how both became sister wives and so and why not make a sub-series and flesh them out. And all the best for the future projects ( can't wait to experience tgem).

War of the Races

OwenQuillin
4.6
55 Chs

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Culture_Lover
Culture_LoverLv12

well, here is my comment, please do not be offended by this: the novel has a good writing, heck, that's something difficult to find here in webnovel, the development of the story is good and interesting, also if you like animal girls it will be to your liking, but like any story, this one has something bad (at least for me), the religion professed by their mother and sister makes them prostitutes who let themselves be ****ed for money so that the "beneficiaries" are drunk by the goddess through them (they are called priestesses) they even go as far as get pregnant and they don't care (that's how the MC's sisters were born) and no matter how much you justify with any nonsense that this is their religion or their customs, if the MC said that they will be part of his harem, I think it will give you a bad taste in your mouth if you came for the wincest tag, so I wish you luck author, but I'm out

3yr

lil_bitch
lil_bitchLv13

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Quadser
QuadserLv3

Man I like your novel very much and if u can please increase the chapter frequency........,............................................................................... ...........

3yr
Demon_Hunter78
Demon_Hunter78Lv1

Found you on Lit and saw in your bio this is where you were going to be putting up more. I’ve enjoyed this story so much. You’ve grown the characters and the world with more and more detail. I can’t wait until the next chapter is released. Looking forward to seeing where our trio is headed, and what the Svartalfar are going to do.

3yr
JCPort
JCPortLv11

Pinkender, congratulations. I haven’t enjoyed a fantasy story since I read Lord of the Rings some 30 yeras ago (obviously taking into consideration the difference in the spicyness of the stories). But what makes me enjoy both is the good story telling and character development, and you are doing a great job at that. It looks as if you are creating a saga (Viridian Vale Saga?), and I look forward to your next chapter.

3yr
Kris_Putnam
Kris_PutnamLv1

Keep up the good work, enjoyable reading and interesting character development. I look forward to the rest of the story........................................................................................................ ...

3yr
ProfessorofCulture
ProfessorofCultureLv14

Now that I know the MC doesn't get ccked, I can say I really love this book. it's not really a flaw per se but you spend too much time on character development, 40 percent of the book is about backstories of characters that I wish you could have just given a summary.

2yr
ProfessorofCulture
ProfessorofCultureLv14

My unbiased review: The book is really well written and is an interesting read but I still can't get over how open their culture is especially the priestesses of selene that are practically whres. I'm at chapter 9 and I hope the MC doesn't get ccked

2yr
adawhiter
adawhiterLv1

I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *).

3yr
highfi
highfiLv5

Good story, like the characters and world. The only problem I have is that the ... cultured scenes... aren't as descriptive or as arousing as I like, but none the less still good.

3yr
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