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MindHNtRLv24yr
2021-03-29 08:25

Well first off I gotta say I don't do well with first person narrations. but that's just my taste in books it's not anything to discredit this one coz there a people who prefer first person narrations. So it took me a while to read through it and for a style o don't prefer the author has done a great job of making me like it. the style of writing is quirky and comedic but not overdone, just the right amount. i like how the story starts off mysterious and clues us in on the character's background and past, slowly building a world around the character. I laughed when he was cussing out with fruit names😂 anyway I'm certainly willing to give this book a chance and i hope others do because its a work of art. Congrats to the author great job 👍🎉

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Alisa Leslie
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48 Chs

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Alisa_Leslie269
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This honest reviews means so much to me.I hope you like it as it develops and are prepared for a twist the story takes.It'll be explained though....anyway,I appreciate this and thank you so much 🤗

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thanks. Abd of course I'm gonna continue with the book. I can't wait for more 👌🏽

Alisa_Leslie269:This honest reviews means so much to me.I hope you like it as it develops and are prepared for a twist the story takes.It'll be explained though....anyway,I appreciate this and thank you so much 🤗
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Lola_Ben
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This story is like a rollercoaster ride, not just because of the storyline, but the author's writing style makes it a bit more fun to read. And that's a good thing. ❤️

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ibbygal
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OO OMG!!!! , I am already liking the book. The female lead has a really good sense of humour so I definitely adding this to my reading list.👉🏽👈🏽🖤

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rskdrama
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First of all, if it's your first novel why would you lock chapters at 13? in the first 12 chapters that read, or I tried to read with the kind of you me conversation in the same paragraph, I will not be progressing! unless you are an 'other world' reader, and looking for for this kind of writing, it's hard to follow!

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Leon_Kingraph
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Very interesting novel. That is all I can say after reading first chapters. Because what else does a reader need?! Only interesting novel with amazing characters.

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Heleinierose14
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At first the story made me think to Alice in wonderland but it different and original the main character will kill out of laughter. For the one who like fantasy stories with a little zest of comedy this is for you[img=recommend]

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HarpGrand
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I've only read the first Chapter so far but this book is actually written in an interesting way! Will definitely put this in my reading list! P.S I can't believe you actually dropped by my story's review section to shamelessly promote XD i feel honored come join our discord server where you can also post a link of your story for others to see. https://discord.gg/vt56SpGeFP

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Vanessa_dowlatram
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Beautifully well written novel thanks to the author who have written this book it have some beautiful words and things in it that touches my heart and that I really loved right now . 🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖

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Andrew_Pinnock
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Thoroughly enjoyable read,loved ever second of it and cant wait for more.The mc is amazing and the author clearly has a phenomenal sene f humor.Why arent people paying for this? Its sooooo much better than alot of books on this site.

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Alisa_Leslie269
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Thank you guys soooo much for reading my book,hope I've been able to put a smile on your face and you're enjoying going on this journey with my girl Jude 😁.Any support-whether it be votes,comments,reviews or purchasing a chapter-would be greatly appreciated.I promise you won't be disappointed 🤗♥️😊

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