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2021-02-06 12:00

I thought it was unique how the author used the seasons!!! I think the story already has a nice flow to it, but I would recommend making the paragraphs shorter though!!! Maybe that's just my preference of reading, but I think it would make the story flow better!!! It was very captivating, and definitely kept my interest in finding out more. I thought the character's introductions were nicely done, and marvelous as well. I thought it was funny at some points in the first chapter, especially when the main protagonist was getting aggravated at her friends. I think this is a brilliant novel!!! Handclap to the author and good luck in the future!!! I do want to add I am the user from the forum as BellsandLexShow!!! Happy writing to you!!!

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