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Go check out my first book Totally In Love, and be on the look out for updates! Instagram:popsicle_jellyfish24, Youtube and Facebook:Popsicle Jellyfish. Discord Server Popsical_Jellyfish Books.

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  • Popsicle_Jellyfish
    Popsicle_Jellyfish1mth
    Replied to d_elfe

    sorry been a like MIA on here!!

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  • Popsicle_Jellyfish
    Popsicle_Jellyfish3mth
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    I do know what some are those things are! I felt that as I reread it to get a different understanding of how it could be improved. As it is being rewritten those things I thought were kinda glossed over, certain issues that bring the true realism value to my book alive. I would love to hear what you think as well on those complaints. For now I'm considering this a rough draft lol!

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  • Popsicle_Jellyfish
    Popsicle_Jellyfish3mth
    Replied to outpost76

    Please let me know what those complaints are! Much appreciated!

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  • Popsicle_Jellyfish
    Popsicle_Jellyfish4mth
    Replied to d_elfe

    I will check it out as soon as I can!!!

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  • Popsicle_Jellyfish
    Popsicle_Jellyfish4mth
    Replied to d_elfe

    Yes I am not for sure though. My sister let me borrow her paper copy, but Im sure you can find it on Amazon. Most books are on there anyways lol!!

    Tristan sighed then; she looked so defeated. So weary. Such a shame to diminish her good disposition when she was a delight. Like an angel roaming the earth, pushed to protect herself and hide her inner light.
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  • Popsicle_Jellyfish
    Popsicle_Jellyfish4mth
    Replied to d_elfe

    yay!!! let me know when it's comes out!!! I know right!!!

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  • Popsicle_Jellyfish
    Popsicle_Jellyfish4mth
    Replied to d_elfe

    Lol sorry just now replying to this. My mind is so hectic right now. Ok thank you!!! I will hold onto my question further until I see the answer. Lol you mean punctuation??? Sorry grammar girl over here!! Ok, I will be looking into it. I do have a question, when you update a chapter of your story, does it send out an announcement to everyone???

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  • Popsicle_Jellyfish
    Popsicle_Jellyfish4mth
    Replied to d_elfe

    Lol I did the same thing from Sebastian's character 😂🤣 It went from Raeka (his aunt whom he doesn't really like ) to eventually Aunt Raeka. Dropping those subtle hints that things are changing in the book. One writer to another!!!

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  • Popsicle_Jellyfish
    Popsicle_Jellyfish4mth
    Replied to d_elfe

    Lol sorry I'm a female so I was like maybe they are a female too??? It's an American novel (I don't know if you live in the starts or not) but I think you could order it. I don't know if you have Amazon, I honestly don't know and just don't want to assume things either. If you do have Amazon you could probably order it off of there!!! Don't get me started on book lists!!!! I'll be recommending them to you all day 😂🤣

    Tristan sighed then; she looked so defeated. So weary. Such a shame to diminish her good disposition when she was a delight. Like an angel roaming the earth, pushed to protect herself and hide her inner light.
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  • Popsicle_Jellyfish
    Popsicle_Jellyfish4mth
    Replied to d_elfe

    Lol well it's clearly there in the writing 🤣😂 good job at that 👏👏

    Frances physically recoiled at once, her eyes misting over. A pang of regret pinched his heart and Tristan breathed out. Stupid, stupid defenses ! She confided her insecurities, and he lashed out at her like a high school bully ! Tristan could have kicked himself for his lack of tact.
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  • Popsicle_Jellyfish
    Popsicle_Jellyfish4mth
    Replied to d_elfe

    Yes!!! Hopefully we all find someone !!! I'm glad you did!!!

    — “I wasn’t in the ‘beautiful’ bunch with my female friends, people flirted with them, not with me. I was the side kick”
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  • Popsicle_Jellyfish
    Popsicle_Jellyfish4mth
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    ... 😲😲😲

    He stood, livid, in the studio and the walls seemed too small to enclose his raw power. Frances pushed her chair back slowly, standing on wobbly legs. Her first instinct was to take a step back… so She took a deep breath, and approached him as if he was a wild animal. Her presence caused him to blink, his voice sounding nearly deformed from the clenching of his jaw.
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  • Popsicle_Jellyfish
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    Not going to lie, I kind of like being the first to comment. As I keep stating over and over how brilliant and well written this author has made this book. I have stated my claims. I thought this one was pretty well written. What more can I say? I think it's pretty brilliant and captivating to read. Frances journey just makes you want to find out more. I am still hoping her and Father Tristan will come together at the end. I also love how the author went from Father Tristan to just Tristan.

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  • Popsicle_Jellyfish
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    Commented

    Brilliant !!! 👏👏👏

    The young woman nodded, unsure, until his own posture relaxed slightly. A long, heavy breath passed her lips at the storm receded in his eyes ; the priest cursed himself. Where did that anger come from to take hold of him so easily ? How long since his emotions had betrayed him, throwing control to the wind ? It was dangerous ground indeed he was treading, all for the sake of Frances’ safety. He should have walked away from her; she endangered his poise and his vows. Yet, he couldn’t let her go. She was so innocent, so brilliant, so gentle… the wolves of reality would eat her alive, right ?
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  • Popsicle_Jellyfish
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    I just like how it went from Father Tristan to Tristan.

    His stomach rolled and twisted so painfully that his lungs refused to breathe in. What ? Her fault ? Is that what she had retained from his warnings ? It was wrong, so very wrong, to hear her shoulder responsibility for harassment. Tristan ground his teeth together.
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  • Popsicle_Jellyfish
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    Commented

    Like always very well written. Reading this paragraph out loud made sense but didn't at the same time. Maybe the wording again here???

    — "Because I am ashamed, all right ? And this guy will get in trouble for something stupid. You said so yourself, it's my fault guys latch onto me. What with Luke, and I didn't even realise it. I probably give signals I shouldn't, right ?"
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  • Popsicle_Jellyfish
    Popsicle_Jellyfish4mth
    Commented

    His anger coming out?? Kind of reminds me of that one twilight moment.

    He stood, livid, in the studio and the walls seemed too small to enclose his raw power. Frances pushed her chair back slowly, standing on wobbly legs. Her first instinct was to take a step back… so She took a deep breath, and approached him as if he was a wild animal. Her presence caused him to blink, his voice sounding nearly deformed from the clenching of his jaw.
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  • Popsicle_Jellyfish
    Popsicle_Jellyfish4mth
    Commented

    Ouch, that hit right to the gut.

    — “I wasn’t in the ‘beautiful’ bunch with my female friends, people flirted with them, not with me. I was the side kick”
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  • Popsicle_Jellyfish
    Popsicle_Jellyfish4mth
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    I don't know think he was, he just didnt want to admit his feelings.

    Frances physically recoiled at once, her eyes misting over. A pang of regret pinched his heart and Tristan breathed out. Stupid, stupid defenses ! She confided her insecurities, and he lashed out at her like a high school bully ! Tristan could have kicked himself for his lack of tact.
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  • Popsicle_Jellyfish
    Popsicle_Jellyfish4mth
    Commented

    Uh oh

    — “Do you truly find me beautiful ?", she eventually asked.
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