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2021-04-18 05:16

This novel is similar to those whose authors think that their readers have memory problems. The FL’s previous occupation like #1 assassin or a highly sought-after genius doctor etc would always be mentioned in high frequency. Like about every 5 pages approximately I think. This is Very annoying. Also, this book has too many inconsistencies and illogical jumps. Spring water? Where and how? When she could only generate a drop of water from her finger (as of chapter 60). So did she “bled” herself dry just to make a cup of “spring water”? There were also typo and grammatical errors that needed to be edited and corrected. Anyways, if you have nothing to read to relieve your boredom, this would be thre last choice of book to read. I just don’t understand why this was chosen when there were others to choose from like “Their Lucky Star was Transmigrated”. 😤 Now this story is worth the vote as it was amusing to read.😊

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thanks! really appreciate comments like this. thus, I don't have to waste my time.

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You're welcome.😊

SuckerForRomance:thanks! really appreciate comments like this. thus, I don't have to waste my time.
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