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2021-03-14 15:11

Honestly not worth your time. It was at the low-end of average for this kind of novel but then the FL suddenly started pulling things out of thin air - she hit some people with rocks that she had "picked up earlier," she saved a child with silver needles she had "found earlier" in her house which is so decrepit it looks like a "slum" (their words, not mine), and to cap it all not only is she tanned (a fact that was well-established) she also somehow has a magically appearing birth-mark on her face. I use the words "magically appearing" because when the FL first saw her own appearance she mentioned nothing about a birthmark but 15 chapters later there it is, inexplicably, on her face -_- Go read something better, don't waste your time on this generic, poorly written novel.

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BrianG9677
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Didn't find them in house she brought them somehow into past

94owl
94owlLv4

Someone said the same on the chapter comments, and I'll reply here the same way I replied to that person: her silver needles followed her into the past and she didn't find it surprising enough to at least "oh, my silver needles?"? This is clearly a case of the author wanting the FL to do something "cool" but not having set up the foreshadowing. Again, it's not the dubious logic of the needles appearing in the past it's the fact that the author didn't introduce them before the very same scene in which she used. Same can be said of her "birthmark" (in fact the birthmark is a bigger offender because the FL saw her appearance multiple times before she ever *mentioned* that she had a birthmark -_-)

BrianG9677:Didn't find them in house she brought them somehow into past
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