Review Detail of lil_bitch in Fractured Void: Twin Stars
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okay. so writing quality is pretty good. grammar is on point and it does not feel rushed. author used good proportions of dialogue vs world building. feels like it's being written by a pro. Mc ain't a beta cuck(so far). FML is pretty cute. stability is too early to comment on. hasn't explained much about world background, but uts only th first 15 chapters so there is still time. all in all, pretty good so far and I hope author keeps this up. I'm looking forward to the next update. only question I have is where is Xia twin? the other girl. I really want MC to travel with them both.
Fractured Void: Twin Stars
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First of all, thank you for going out of your way to write a review this early on in the novel. About Xia's twin, I can't say much at this time because that's a major spoiler for Xia's true identity. Most likely it will only be revealed at the time when the two reach Spirit Star (the massive planet at the center), which would mean when they transcend to immortality (level 100+). The only thing I can say for now is that she is Xia's other half and Xia's memories are hidden with her, which will gradually be revealed later on in the story. Before breaking through the level 100, the two Souls will become one, so by then most of the information hidden in that half will become known to us.