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2021-01-15 22:44

So far, so good. I like the story and I think its a worthy read. Maybe not actually a 5 star story since the writing quality is a bit lower. It looks like the author was writing this on his phone. Regardless, giving it a high rating to give it a boost in the rankings so people can find it!

Marvel, Growing in war

Brett_Knox
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Brett_Knox
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I will try to work on the writing, I am on my phone so ill pay more attention to grammatical errors, I also fixed part of chapter 7 for how he was able to leave if you want to check it out. I appreciate your review.

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vkg313
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No worries! Your story is good enough that I usually check if you released something every day or two.

Brett_Knox:I will try to work on the writing, I am on my phone so ill pay more attention to grammatical errors, I also fixed part of chapter 7 for how he was able to leave if you want to check it out. I appreciate your review.
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Brett_Knox
Brett_KnoxAuthor

I'll try to update more but I have a ****ton of school work. I'll try to fit in chapters more often tho.

vkg313:No worries! Your story is good enough that I usually check if you released something every day or two.
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vkg313
vkg313Lv6

No worries. Your other work comes first!

Brett_Knox:I'll try to update more but I have a ****ton of school work. I'll try to fit in chapters more often tho.
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I wrote it and im proud of it for the most part. I'm pretty sure I'm blinded by vanity to rate it accurately so I would appreciate your reviews

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Pedro_Padre
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I like the slow growth the MC's having/experiencing. He doesn't just out of nowhere go from lifting 300 pounds to suddenly lifting say 90 tonnes. Love his mutationđź‘Ťđź‘Ť Question though? If he hurts himself to develop harder skin as a way of adapting while growing, then does his mutation work in a similar but smaller/lesser way to that of Darwin's or something along those lines of adapting/evolving or not?

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