Review Detail of NikTitanik866 in The Goblin's Feast

There is a story here, its just hard to find it. The writing is erratic, there are absolutely no transitions from one scene to another and some details of the world are very counterintuitive. If each chapter of this novel was turned into two and the pace was slowed down this could be quite something. Since the Author seems to be active, please do tell if you want me to elaborate on something.