Item: Love's Penalties
Rating: 5
Author: TheDarkest_Girl

TheDarkest_GirlLv13yr

2021-05-05 22:14

I am just in love with this novel, the characters are amazing and the storyline is so interesting, and the way the story is described is so beautiful, I feel like I can imagine every scene♥♥♥😍😍😍 , awesome work author, keep writing 😘😍

Love's Penalties

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