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Rody_Amgad
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2021-01-11 22:19

The story is very great. I loved it. And the story is so interesting, cute and beautiful. I Advise everyone to read it because it is just amazing. ❤️🧡💛💚💙💜🖤♥️💘💝💖💗💓💞💕💟❣️ ❤️🧡💛💚💙💜🖤♥️💘💝💖💗💓💞💕💟❣️

Love's Penalties

ruchika_mangeshwar
4.8
148 Chs

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Amit_Verma_5670
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Hats off to the writer of this story. I mean, how a person can write such an amazing story. I'vs read the story, but mentally I'm still in the story. Everyone should read it once and experience a worth reading story.

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Doctor_Min
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I want to rate this after i finished reading chapter 1, and I found this story interesting, i really look forward on the upcoming chaps, hoping i won't be disappointed, i know i may felt stress but that is normal for me since all stories will really bring you stress as a matter of fact😂. So yeah I'm wishing the author a good luck on making this mysterious piece.... Fightin'💪

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RedCeiling
RedCeilingLv5

A respectable attempt. Nice take on sexual fidelity. Written in first person past tense (limited perspective). Pros: The characters have great integrity and loyalty towards eachother. Cons: Grammatical and punctuation errors in some chapters while others are good (perhaps some are yet to be edited), constant switching between POVs (I feel it is inconsistent; you might like it). I am at chapter 24 now and the while the characters have their strong points, they are rather irrational something (is love truly blind?) and the side characters show excessive care for the FL and ML alike. Perhaps the author wanted too keep the focus of the story intact but that made the side characters start to feel inanimate after some time. Overall, give it a chance. With some editing, it can turn out to be a great work.

3yr
Mia_2550
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Wel done author keep writing like this stories I really like this novel... 👌🏻 👌🏻 👌🏻 Great job❤️ this story is commendable 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻 You are such a great writer ❤️❤️❤️

3yr
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Olivia_2650
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Good job! Well done! Fantastic! Perfect! That’s great! Nice work! Excellent! That’s really remarkable. Good grades! This story is praiseworthy 😍😍😍 Very interesting ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ Keep writing 🙈 🙈 🙈

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TheDarkest_Girl
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I am just in love with this novel, the characters are amazing and the storyline is so interesting, and the way the story is described is so beautiful, I feel like I can imagine every scene♥♥♥😍😍😍 , awesome work author, keep writing 😘😍

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Mynxiii1
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As I have read many chapters already, i notice that some grammar are wrong; however, I like the story, full of mystery and very confusing. Wishing a good luck for the author 💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙

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Kayleigh_Harkins
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The translation isn’t good. It make it very confusing. But I love the story. I’ve felt every emotion the characters have. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

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