Item: Fate Written
Rating: 4.8
Author: Ndidi_Otuya

Ndidi_OtuyaLv23yr

2021-01-19 21:56

It pulled me in the way only wonderfully written words can. Your writing Quality is radiant, and story development is intriguing. Tehehee, Amazing Job :)

Fate Written

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