An absolute gem of a story...I was expecting some bs story where mc fucks all girls by making them horny in 10 chaps or less but thank god it wasn't like that. Writing quality is pretty good and better than almost all fics on this site. Story development is slow, just the way I like it. Characters are portrayed well and they don't feel like cardboard cutouts. Mc is an interesting characters who can have thoughts that are not related to fucking women and even has a proper goal. World background is good as author expands the world and tries exploring it instead of the usual Mc goes to U.A trope which is stale. Overall a decent Mha fic with good writing quality.

Great fan fiction, where the author really worked on it and it is clearly visible. Ranging from a narrative style where there is no meaningless chatter, to sprawling chapters. The author writes very well, adding interesting facts and information about the main character, the story and the world and all that is between dialogues and mental monologo MC. I am surprised and very happy to see this style of storytelling on Webnovel, especially in erotic fan fiction. For this, you have earned my sincere respect. The characters are their behavior and motivations. So far, this is the best performance I've seen among the MHA fanfics. The characters really feel like they're alive, not just cardboard boxes. A lot of facts about the characters, mentions casually, or as if by accident, in the dialogues and so on. That for the reader it is a pleasure to read because your brain starts to work and you realize that this small fact, it matters. Although, to understand such things, you need to be familiar with the original. It's very cool when the author throws crumbs of information into your head, so that your brain works and gets to the truth said behind these crumbs. Of course, this is not a super cool, psychological trick, or the author is a genius with a +999 IQ. This is a popular style of writing, but for 2 months of active reading in Webnovel, I managed to forget, become stupid, and when the author gave food for thought, I seemed to wake up). I admit it sounds unconvincing and banal, but I'm glad that finally, at least someone, does not chew to us, readers. from A to Z. Just respect! A serious approach to the Main Character, his origin, quirk, motivation, goals and the universe of the main character. It's very cool written that I can only praise you for it. Usually in Webnovel, these things are explained in the author's notes, because often these authors simply do not know how to describe the experience, character and development of the actual persons in the book Competent and well-written erotica. From all that I read in Webnovel (I like to repeat myself.) This fan fiction is the closest to the spirit of the job's Cambrian. And if you know who this type is, then you understand that everything is fine with lemon and even more. BIIIIG chapters! Very large chapters for webnovels (Did I tell you that I like to repeat myself?!) this is just crazy! Author, are you a person at all? So many symbols, yet written with high quality?! And all this for free??? *Stood up and began to applaud.* May God bless you author, may God bless you! I just can't find the words, I sincerely thank you. In conclusion, I would like to give you some advice. First, you need to adjust, or even change the description. After reading it, I thought that this is another shit-fanfic and forgot about it. You need to emphasize that this is not stupid garbage fan fiction, but something more serious. Secondly, please do not compete with GhostyZ, you just destroyed it! It is he who should be equal to you, his work looks like a child's doodle in comparison with your fanfiction. I'm not kidding, he just doesn't deserve to be considered a competitor by an author like you. I got acquainted with the work of this GhostyZ and I can honestly say that he is the worst author I have ever seen in 7 years as a reader. Believe me author, from his hands will come out the maximum a weak and mediocre book. Don't humiliate yourself by comparing yourself to this "GhostyGiveMeaStones". Well-deserved 5 stars!

(I had to do this review with google translate because I spoke Spanish or Castilian but I loved the story and I wanted to give it a review, sorry for the spelling mistakes) This story is interesting, beautiful and hot, it is also surprising how the author can introduce biological and chemical knowledge without making you dizzy, lost or bored, he manages to maintain a constant and fluid rhythm that does not stagnate or get ahead of problems. that the author presents, also obviously the potential of the character is great but at the same time it is not clear how far his individual strength can go (which I personally love and makes me wonder how far his individual strength can go, for me it is this story is can read a thousand times, I already read 3 times)

Greeting, men of culture. You have just stepped into a sanctuary of goodness and delight. —This fan-fic is going to change the canon story into something new by adding a good dose of lemon juice. —Most chapters are longer than 1.5k words (it can reach more than 3k words for some). —Don't expect an MC who wants to be a hero or a villain, what Felix wants is completely different. —All the characters of the manga will make their appearances in the story, be ready for some fun 😏

Nice. The writing quality is way better than the other two novels. There aren't any PATREON DEALS every other chapter, which is great. The way you integrate the gamer stuff into it, showing stats and skills, is well done. The story is developing just fine, I'm pretty into it, the MC using his quirk to get girls. The MC is pretty fleshed out, his quirk as well. It's not like the other novel where the MC just gains some OP power right off the bat for no other reasons than finding a harem. The girls so far are fine, cannon girls and no OCs so far, please keep it that way, I'm not particularly good at remembering OC characters other than the MC. What can I say, you really did a good job compared to the other two authors. The first author only had like 3 chapters out, and the other is kind of messy and has a weird cult following for some reason. The writing is really high quality for a webnovel fanfiction, and so is the story. Keep doing a good job.

The FF is neat. When reading the Title, Tags and Synopsis before reading a story you have certain expectations and this one has exceeded my expectations for what I expected. The backstory of the MC is intruiging and is ACTUALLY responsible for his character and personality. The indtroduction is something I appreciate as it shows a preview of his quirk and his character. The explanation of the society, the thoughts of MC and the females having non 1-dimensional personality along with difficulty of making them accept the harem is something that showcases the depth of the world & society and uniqueness of the characters. Keep the good work up Author

Writing Quality 4 Stability of Updates 4 Story Development 2 Character Design 2 World Background 2 The total score 2.8

is this based on our Lord and savior ratatata bnha doujin ? bruh I'm in

Writing Quality: is pretty neat, partly needs some work 9.5/10 idk about updates but dont drop this and keep updating or else 😃🔪 10/10 Story Development: 9.3/10 Character Design: this needs some work 8/10 World Development: 9.7/10

I like it, better than the vast majority of +18 content on this website. Character interaction and scene development could be improved on but I'm being very nitpicky. Good job author! Guys each chapter is worth 3 chapters compared to other novels so If you are afraid of that dig in because those 38 chapters are loaded.