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Author here! This review is going to be different than my first review. talking about the ratings above, β€’the writing quality: maybe average at the start but even there I have tried my best to deliver every sentence in a way that will be understandable for my readers! β€’ the story development: is slow but you won't find many holes unless you are urging for one...lol. And if you are thinking that, "Oh another cultivation novel where the mc is gonna be getting treasures left and right and his training will end in the blink of an eye" then you are half right and half wrong. Also from the name of the novel, some may think that the end is known, then you are very wrong. β€’ character design: hehe my fav part....the character story for every character won't take place on the spot...(like hi I am wu shi from the shi clan and I am this, while my dad is that and my fiancee is bla bla bla), "nope", each important side character will get their times to shine as for mc, he will be like your dating partner, who you will get to know slowly over time. his last may be revealed at times other times, you will get to see how he changed. β€’ World Background (First): Its a merged world as for the world where mc is from, I have taken every step possible to demolish it, baby...while the new world is divided into four zones, and each zone has countless mountain ranges (read the novel to know further πŸ‘‰πŸ‘ˆ) β€’ updating stability: with my PEN in my hand, I am putting out 14-16 chapters per week, but if I get more readers then I can handle a max of 28 chapters each week...up to you guys! tiny extra info: I am also reading it just in case I can refine any chapters since I feel like I have improved a lot, so you may see some trolling by yours truly, here and there. The editing will be 10 chapters per day from the start. as for the ongoing chapters, I publish them after editing but still, sometimes some cursed mistakes clench onto the chapters while escaping my deadly gaze. The end: ( I am an exp maniac...) Do give BGDW a try if you are here already and hopefully you will enjoy it!

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