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ltsArcane
ltsArcaneLv23yr
2021-09-10 21:03

A surprisingly well-planned novel. I was reading through the comments of some Chinese carbon copy and happened upon a comment that said "Rating this 5 stars because at least it's better than my own story.", where I decided to take a look and ended up reading over 40 chapters before I even realized what was going on. Caught my attention at the unique setting and plot and dragged me through the story by the leash. To the author, you shouldn't belittle yourself despite how good your story is. I have high expectations for you. (Inb4 I'm thinking about a different author and clicked on the wrong profile. That'd be hella embarrassing LOL. Either way, this was a good read, and I'm planning to continue after I finish off some of my older stories.)

Becoming God of a Dystopian World

The_Fake_God
4.8
299 Chs

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The_Fake_God
The_Fake_GodAuthor

Welp thanks for such an awesome review! I will wait for your return, soldier! enjoy~

3yr
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iAmTheStrongest
iAmTheStrongestLv14

A good novel! The spelling mistakes are minimal, the chapters arent too short, the update stabIlity is great, the world background is clear! The only downside is that privilege chapters are early. Overall, i recommend this novel for people to read :)

3yr

User_0000
User_0000Lv12

Great novel. Fun to read. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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The_Fake_God
The_Fake_GodAuthor

Gonna be shameless and leave a review for this masterpiece. Maybe not really a masterpiece but do give it a read and hopefully you all will enjoy it ,

3yr
The_Fake_God
The_Fake_GodAuthor

Author here! This review is going to be different than my first review. talking about the ratings above, •the writing quality: maybe average at the start but even there I have tried my best to deliver every sentence in a way that will be understandable for my readers! • the story development: is slow but you won't find many holes unless you are urging for one...lol. And if you are thinking that, "Oh another cultivation novel where the mc is gonna be getting treasures left and right and his training will end in the blink of an eye" then you are half right and half wrong. Also from the name of the novel, some may think that the end is known, then you are very wrong. • character design: hehe my fav part....the character story for every character won't take place on the spot...(like hi I am wu shi from the shi clan and I am this, while my dad is that and my fiancee is bla bla bla), "nope", each important side character will get their times to shine as for mc, he will be like your dating partner, who you will get to know slowly over time. his last may be revealed at times other times, you will get to see how he changed. • World Background (First): Its a merged world as for the world where mc is from, I have taken every step possible to demolish it, baby...while the new world is divided into four zones, and each zone has countless mountain ranges (read the novel to know further 👉👈) • updating stability: with my PEN in my hand, I am putting out 14-16 chapters per week, but if I get more readers then I can handle a max of 28 chapters each week...up to you guys! tiny extra info: I am also reading it just in case I can refine any chapters since I feel like I have improved a lot, so you may see some trolling by yours truly, here and there. The editing will be 10 chapters per day from the start. as for the ongoing chapters, I publish them after editing but still, sometimes some cursed mistakes clench onto the chapters while escaping my deadly gaze. The end: ( I am an exp maniac...) Do give BGDW a try if you are here already and hopefully you will enjoy it!

3yr
DripSoup
DripSoupLv4

In a previous review I criticized the description of the story since it was not very good. However, since then the author has changed the description to be much better. I have deleted my previous review.

3yr
Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4

REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE This is nich and nice man. Hope it gets the exposure it deserves! Congrats on winning WPC! Hehehe, I am waiting for it to reach a million views!

3yr
Rafi_Mohd
Rafi_MohdLv4

it's really good and funny 😜 overall good character and idiot too.. chapter came are too slow.. should have been faster . . . . . . . . . .

3yr
Pretend
PretendLv3

It's a decent read author, good job! .......................................................................................................................

3yr
Thee_AngryBird
Thee_AngryBirdLv5

pretty decent novel.. I like how it goes from the very beginning.. it makes me just want more . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ... . . . . .

3yr
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