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Mel_Aniv
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2021-05-04 09:28

REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE This is nich and nice man. Hope it gets the exposure it deserves! Congrats on winning WPC! Hehehe, I am waiting for it to reach a million views!

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The_Fake_God
The_Fake_GodAuthor

thank you for such an awesome review[img=recommend][img=recommend]

Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4

You are welcome! I am happy that you liked it. Please also check mine in review swap please...... πŸ™ πŸ˜‰ ❀️

The_Fake_God:thank you for such an awesome review[img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Nanak_Khazanewala
Nanak_KhazanewalaLv2

bruh 140 and still not outta the sect and you say not slow paced?

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The_Fake_God
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Author here! This review is going to be different than my first review. talking about the ratings above, β€’the writing quality: maybe average at the start but even there I have tried my best to deliver every sentence in a way that will be understandable for my readers! β€’ the story development: is slow but you won't find many holes unless you are urging for one...lol. And if you are thinking that, "Oh another cultivation novel where the mc is gonna be getting treasures left and right and his training will end in the blink of an eye" then you are half right and half wrong. Also from the name of the novel, some may think that the end is known, then you are very wrong. β€’ character design: hehe my fav part....the character story for every character won't take place on the spot...(like hi I am wu shi from the shi clan and I am this, while my dad is that and my fiancee is bla bla bla), "nope", each important side character will get their times to shine as for mc, he will be like your dating partner, who you will get to know slowly over time. his last may be revealed at times other times, you will get to see how he changed. β€’ World Background (First): Its a merged world as for the world where mc is from, I have taken every step possible to demolish it, baby...while the new world is divided into four zones, and each zone has countless mountain ranges (read the novel to know further πŸ‘‰πŸ‘ˆ) β€’ updating stability: with my PEN in my hand, I am putting out 14-16 chapters per week, but if I get more readers then I can handle a max of 28 chapters each week...up to you guys! tiny extra info: I am also reading it just in case I can refine any chapters since I feel like I have improved a lot, so you may see some trolling by yours truly, here and there. The editing will be 10 chapters per day from the start. as for the ongoing chapters, I publish them after editing but still, sometimes some cursed mistakes clench onto the chapters while escaping my deadly gaze. The end: ( I am an exp maniac...) Do give BGDW a try if you are here already and hopefully you will enjoy it!

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