the book is well written. in respect to other pokemon fics I've read, this was definitely unique. the world setting and character is well defined. the story development is steady too. the author has yet to upset me with his release rates. if I am to judge impartially, the story deserves 5 stars. but, to me personally, it's too heavy. the level of darkness is fine. so is the pacing. but together, I just don't like it. it's a good story but just not for me. sorry because I will probably stop reading this. thank you author for writing this and hope you keep it up. don't be disheartened and lose motivation. I might rejoin the ranks of your readers in the future. good luck.
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You need to rewrite your synopsis and add tags. i literally have no idea what this novel is about other then its in pokemon. like is your MC human or a pokemon. im ‘assuming’ this will be dark by the name of your fic but it would help if you added the tag for that. this would be a waste of time to read, im a picky reader like most people are and i wont waste even a minute on something that could potentailly be not my cup of tea.the more detailed you can make this the more likely youll gain readers.
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"Star Wars: Rise of the Cortosis Slave" is plagiarized. The original is called "Path of Ruin [Star Wars SI]" on spacebattles. Plz do not support the plagiarized fic anymore. I have to comment on a different fic or the thief will delete my comment. Check the story on my profile to know more.
Cyber_Tom67:You need to rewrite your synopsis and add tags. i literally have no idea what this novel is about other then its in pokemon. like is your MC human or a pokemon. im ‘assuming’ this will be dark by the name of your fic but it would help if you added the tag for that. this would be a waste of time to read, im a picky reader like most people are and i wont waste even a minute on something that could potentailly be not my cup of tea.the more detailed you can make this the more likely youll gain readers.
"At the time I didn't believe this would be a problem" admitted the writer, his tone wry. "But your point is well taken, I suppose I'll have to sprinkle in a few tags to keep innocents from wasting their precious time." <3
Cyber_Tom67:You need to rewrite your synopsis and add tags. i literally have no idea what this novel is about other then its in pokemon. like is your MC human or a pokemon. im ‘assuming’ this will be dark by the name of your fic but it would help if you added the tag for that. this would be a waste of time to read, im a picky reader like most people are and i wont waste even a minute on something that could potentailly be not my cup of tea.the more detailed you can make this the more likely youll gain readers.
Im not exactly against wasting some time. i ussually give a book a few chapters before i decide if i want to drop or not, however if the summary doesnt appeal to me or if i dont know what its about i dont read it in the first place. i know they say dont judge a book by its cover but that doesnt include well books.
Lordcanute:"At the time I didn't believe this would be a problem" admitted the writer, his tone wry. "But your point is well taken, I suppose I'll have to sprinkle in a few tags to keep innocents from wasting their precious time." <3
"Should you decide to read, then I will reluctantly open myself up to your critique, but please be gentle. I'm not sure my ego can handle more than a few well-placed jabs," the author joked.
Cyber_Tom67:Im not exactly against wasting some time. i ussually give a book a few chapters before i decide if i want to drop or not, however if the summary doesnt appeal to me or if i dont know what its about i dont read it in the first place. i know they say dont judge a book by its cover but that doesnt include well books.
