It’s a great fanfic but a bit dark though but in a realistic way, the grammars good and the updates are consistent with a different starter pokemon matching the dark theme a good read and author just don’t drop it

the book is well written. in respect to other pokemon fics I've read, this was definitely unique. the world setting and character is well defined. the story development is steady too. the author has yet to upset me with his release rates. if I am to judge impartially, the story deserves 5 stars. but, to me personally, it's too heavy. the level of darkness is fine. so is the pacing. but together, I just don't like it. it's a good story but just not for me. sorry because I will probably stop reading this. thank you author for writing this and hope you keep it up. don't be disheartened and lose motivation. I might rejoin the ranks of your readers in the future. good luck.

overall to me the story is good and so is the combat in the story.so all and all it is a nice story and I look forward to more chapters (: xx

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I enjoyed it. Yes a little slow paced but I don't care. Do you author. Thank you, not many decent pokemon novels or fan fics out there. abcdefg

Good story little different from the usual with less cliche setting needs a bit of polish to the story and keep up the good work and don’t drop the fic

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