Hands down one of the best World Building I've ever seen. The plot is amazing, and you are making me want to improve overall as a writer. Hope you continue because I added this to my library so I am looking forward to it!

Shameless author promoting my work. If you can get past my not so perfect English, and the fact that is the first time writing a novel, I hope you'll enjoy the world I'm creating born from countless nights without sleep ahah... Love to y'all

So I sat down and read this gem, starting around 11 PM, author hooked and trapped me into the best rabbit hole I could ask for. I feel like I blinked and it was 9 AM. I took a vacation day just to read this with zero regrets. Thank you author I hope to see you write more of this.

The story took such a nose dive at chapter five and six. it’s one if not the worst and most annoying cliche plots that always get used in these types of stories, even though it completely ruins it. It was really promising but that just completely ruined it for me. it’s a dumb and incredibly un-original plot point.

TLDR, This stories like a writing project a 7th grader would turn in and get a C for. Interesting at first, cliche after cliche, to instant power-up and time skip, to adventuring with no clear purpose but a slight hero complex, no clear understanding of how strong the MC is. Apparently he's a "Sage" but we never really get a clear understanding of the world's power scale and how strong a "sage" is supposed to be, from what I can see so far he seems like a 2nd rate magician with a few single and multi-target spells, nothing that can kill over 10 people really. He kills completely evil people like slavers who killed his father and (maybe r*ped his mother? author was never clear) also killed his mother, or a fat old noble lady who threw one of her slaves to be r*ped by 3 men then killed, then shoved a fire poker up the bum of the other cat girl. But then feels bad and like he wasn't supposed to do that. He gets on the wrong side of a receptionist because of his naiveness who starts discriminating and bullying him even sending him to a brothel and a recommendation to one of those male-like female cliche characters. He then stays there despite paying more or less the same as a normal inn despite knowing where some normal inns are (place he stayed at when he first came in the city). Theres alot more stupid stuff like this to read in this book but ill end it here otherwise this review wouldnt be readable. It's not bad to have a few cliches and unlikeable characters, you just have to balance it out with your own original ideas and interesting plot points. For example, it doesn't make sense for the receptionist to be mad at the MC for so long, or the MC to just sit there and take her abuse without easily clearing things up, or to be staying in the brothel like hotel for so long when there are clearly other options for the same price. You could have at least gave a destination for the MC other than "wandering around relying on plot armor for lucky encounters". For example, finding some lost relic of the succubus race that his mother had, or seeking out his fathers sister in the capital to check up on her and write from there. These are some basic examples but a little can go a long way.

amazing well built plot and world building that will draw you in. Author is also so gente to provide readers a map in every chapter comment section, and it works wonderfully. Lots of unique, funny, quirky characters, and I feel like a lot more has to be introduced yet. SPOILER ALSO I'M ANSIOUSLY WAITING FOR WHEN HE FINALLY DO SOMETHING WITH THIA!

personally, l like the book. it has, good characters, realism, character building, a good author, and also is quite satisfying. like when bad people get what's coming. that being death of course. so overall, 8/10 would recommend.

This novel is well write and i thank the author for ir . i will not spoil you it a heroic fantasy world about magic and the stuff but this time the story goes well with it up and down... i hope the author finish this because i really like it

this novel has really good world and character building, and the plot is also really good! the only problem is that the grammar is a bit messed up at parts but its understandable. really liking this so far, author seems to have an idea of what hes doing, im in boi. this junior brother hopes senior brother will take the trouble of coming along on this journey with him!

Not gonna lie, I'm not a huge fan of Dark themes but your story changed my point of view. The story build up had me on the edge of my seat. I loved it and I would recommend it to my friends.