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Masterofall1
Masterofall1Lv143yr
2021-10-21 09:57

Unfortunately, the story is ruined by a lack of understanding of the Witcher universe, with there being inconsistency in universe, I could understand if it was an AU but it's not, but the major issue I have with the story is the main character personality, he's supposed to be scheming, cunning, intelliegent, and manipulative, but he somehow can't resolve a conflict between him and 3 other children for years? Like really? He couldn't have just Idk, accidentally upped their intake of hazardous substances? Or falsely taught them, so he's still at the top? Another thing is the main character's thinking/talking, he talks like an edgy 14-year-old, and xanxia protagonist, with 'hating all humans' having extreme hatred towards minor grievances, etc...

The Witcher: Of Serpents and Blood

RevenantSnake
4.4
40 Chs

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Z1op
Z1opLv12

Thanks for the warning.

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DevilsArray
DevilsArrayLv5

one of the best witcher fanfics out here. it has a nice taste to it, the flow of the story is good, writing and presentation is awesome. there is no useless ROB, just a reincarnation as it should be. this holds a lot of potential and promise and can be a nice reminiscence of our loved series THE WITCHER

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Lionheart007
Lionheart007Lv5

This is without a doubt the greatest witcher fanfiction I have ever seen. The personalities, the scruple, or rather the lack thereof, the background, the end game goals, the manipulation, it is absolutely perfect! Please, never stop writing this s*it mate, for it is really f*ucking great!

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Great_Abby
Great_AbbyLv3

Awesome fanfic! and author, you should add the tags 'videogame', and 'Witcher', and 'magic' , to you list of tags. it would help a lot! Really looking forward towards more! Breathtaking fanfic!

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JManM
JManMLv5

I am torn on this story. The author has some serious flow to his writing making you want to read more and more, but there are some poor plotting decisions and characterization that make me less than enthused about the direction of the story. The character seems like an incel. I don't know if that is what the author hoped for or not. I think this story is a fun read for the most part but anyone claiming this is the best it gets and this is a must read is lying to you.

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FluffiestEmperor
FluffiestEmperorLv6

The quality is great and the story is engaging, however my gripes with the story are an enormous blunder in my opinon, without spoiling anything, let just say that the MC is smart, except when he isn't, he doesn't trust anyone, except when he does, does types of issues. The events leading to chapter 21-24 seem forced, the story needed him to make mistakes, so he made them. Well anyway, my rant is over. The fic is great, give it a shot and decide for yourselves.

3yr
Ballad
BalladLv5

Just Awesome it's a Well Written Witcher Story with a Actual Realistic MC who doesn't wanna play fix it or hero. plus he's caught the Sorceress Sickness which is pretty great if your a witcher fan I recommend 100%.

3yr
Nat_Rob
Nat_RobLv2

mc is overly edgey. writer as 3 year old acting like adults and lack understanding of witcher lore xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxcxxxxxx

3yr
Truelove_Story
Truelove_StoryLv3

this is absolutely wizard please don't drop this.///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

3yr
Fury_123
Fury_123Lv3

Five star fanfic without a doubt, I recommend this to anyone looking for something good to read.[img=recommend][img=exp][img=coins][img=update][img=faceslap]

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