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FluffiestEmperor
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2021-01-14 13:50

The quality is great and the story is engaging, however my gripes with the story are an enormous blunder in my opinon, without spoiling anything, let just say that the MC is smart, except when he isn't, he doesn't trust anyone, except when he does, does types of issues. The events leading to chapter 21-24 seem forced, the story needed him to make mistakes, so he made them. Well anyway, my rant is over. The fic is great, give it a shot and decide for yourselves.

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