Nah sorry, the story is good but it is just way to complex. Especially if you have no clue about warframe or whatever. I like reading stories as a pass time something I don't need to think much about, is easy to follow to pass the time. Like in this there are like 100+ abilities for the mc and all the different combos to go with it. It's like an acc game character which is good for detail but way to fcking complex for me. I have always hated stories where there is too much going on and to many abilities for the mc. Like if he just had his rifle/sniper gun, pistol and sword each ofc having an ability. The mc then has his suit that boosts everything like it does healing etc. This would be cool, he would be like a futuristic assassin. You can easily keep up with what he can do if you get me? Instead, like I mentioned it is just way to complex. It was also hinted at that he can give his allies these mods. Hate mc sharing systems with others like a party feature. Just destroys every story it is in... so yeah not for me. However, that said if you like complex stories this is a decent story for you. Like one of the game characters that have thousands of things to add to them and each having any number of builds for your character. Like for me, this is a one-piece story. One-piece characters all rly have haki, a devil fruit, maybe a sword and inhuman physical power. It's simple, easy to follow and like. I guess you get my point im trying to say haha. But yeah gl to author
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LIKEIk but then he has like tons of them bronze orbs silver gold orbs no? He can equip ten things? At once. But then he can switch them ten around to whatever he has. So different builds for different situations. Then he like 10+ different weapons for each slot, then he has only one frame but I guess he will have tons more in the future? And then you will prob add things on top of them warframes? Adding onto this he can earn as many stances as he wants. SO yeah I might have been a bit exaggerated by saying a hundred. But there is still a good ton of abilties. Like im not saying this is bad. In fact, it is good that it is so detailed it's like a real game character. It's just for me it is too much if that makes sense? For something, I want to read anyway. Plus I have no idea about warframe so all these stats and names make even less sense to me and I will be spending most of my time focusing on adding and searching up everything... So yeah
Loyalscum:also the mc doesn't really have a 100 + abilities there are only 4 available per warfare. the augments I allowed the mc to use are just the cool .but there eventual useless against strong characters.
Oh didn't know this. Thank god it isnt summoning characters from different worlds as this would have killed the story asap xD This could be an interesting idea to expand on. But yeah again like I said with the other comments. It is just not the type of story for me? So yeah gl. Seems good for a targeted audience.
Loyalscum:companions are for genetically engineered animal companions or Sentinel robots that he builds. it has nothing to do with ship companions or anyone else that he recruits.