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VEGEKU
VEGEKULv64yr
2021-02-21 04:26

truly a hopeless novel and trash and retard MC and nonsense plot story. I don't understand why the authors of this genre of the novel insist on making the MC dump and dumper with each passing chapter and plots will become more and more nonsense Like always we have a super Idiot, retard, dump with no common sense, and this situation will become ort and worst as the story goes on. Jut in the 20th chapters and it's like a crazy person. Webnovel must pay more attention to the novels it chose.

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David_Moore_4158
David_Moore_4158Lv1

you stupid mother******, you said author was making mc dumper and dumper, that's not even a word get a life dumb***

Daoist3tfIHe
Daoist3tfIHeLv1

ive read pretty far in the story, where are you finding this 'dumb' Mc?

TheNobleLion
TheNobleLionLv14

In the first few chapters, man literally tried to move the pin of a spinning wheel instead of the wheel itself. Author is clearly making the MC dumb for the sake of "comedy".

Daoist3tfIHe:ive read pretty far in the story, where are you finding this 'dumb' Mc?
Anime_World_6808
Anime_World_6808Lv4

it was just the first few chapter, mc is clearly smart anyone can see that, and if people form an opinion of mc just by reading the first 50 chapters then they have no right to write a review about mc being dumb or even form an opinion about it, it's like giving an anime a 1 star just by watching a single episode.

TheNobleLion:In the first few chapters, man literally tried to move the pin of a spinning wheel instead of the wheel itself. Author is clearly making the MC dumb for the sake of "comedy".
Anime_World_6808
Anime_World_6808Lv4

*sigh~* such dumb people.

TheNobleLion:In the first few chapters, man literally tried to move the pin of a spinning wheel instead of the wheel itself. Author is clearly making the MC dumb for the sake of "comedy".
TheNobleLion
TheNobleLionLv14

Oh yeah? Why don't you provide some examples on how the MC is "clearly" smart? 50 chapters may not be enough to properly evaluate a novel normally, but when the premise of a novel is idiotic (i.e. provoke people like a moron to get points), you can pretty accurately predict what the novel will be like later on. At the very least, it won't really deviate from that premise. Heck, maybe the MC even does get smarter after 3000 chapters, but the idiotic situations will never change and will instead be packaged as "comedy".

Anime_World_6808:it was just the first few chapter, mc is clearly smart anyone can see that, and if people form an opinion of mc just by reading the first 50 chapters then they have no right to write a review about mc being dumb or even form an opinion about it, it's like giving an anime a 1 star just by watching a single episode.
TheNobleLion
TheNobleLionLv14

Does it feel good to call other people names? Do you get a rush or some sense of superiority? Congratulations, you have successfully displayed what a connoisseur of novels you are by establishing your clearly superior taste in novels compared to us plebians. What an absolute win. You can have it, hope you find some peace in your life.

Anime_World_6808:*sigh~* such dumb people.
Anime_World_6808
Anime_World_6808Lv4

it is very very obvious that he is clearly smart because after few hundred chapters... maybe like 300 after that he goes out the palace and after 500 or 600 chapter and you can CLEARLY see mc is smart, deducting your opponent plan with few hints, confusing enemies (who are very smart btw) and many more if you read enough. And you do not need to exgeriate by saying 3000 chapters after because if you have enough brain you can CLEARLY see mc is smart even when he didn't go outside the palace inexperienced yes but smart, mc will get his experience after he leaves the palace, so there you go your PROOF and if this still isn't enough you can read the novel.....

TheNobleLion:Oh yeah? Why don't you provide some examples on how the MC is "clearly" smart? 50 chapters may not be enough to properly evaluate a novel normally, but when the premise of a novel is idiotic (i.e. provoke people like a moron to get points), you can pretty accurately predict what the novel will be like later on. At the very least, it won't really deviate from that premise. Heck, maybe the MC even does get smarter after 3000 chapters, but the idiotic situations will never change and will instead be packaged as "comedy".
Anime_World_6808
Anime_World_6808Lv4

Well that clearly is very rude, I like calling people with names when they deserve it you clearly are a dumb person if you don't realise that because saying mc is dumb in this novel is saying deku is a bad mc without knowing him fully or watching the show fully, and I don't a rush or excited by saying dumb to a dumb person or to childrens (who are clearly dumb) which you clearly are.*sigh~* I guess this is the internet which CLEARLY is full of dumb people like you.

TheNobleLion:Does it feel good to call other people names? Do you get a rush or some sense of superiority? Congratulations, you have successfully displayed what a connoisseur of novels you are by establishing your clearly superior taste in novels compared to us plebians. What an absolute win. You can have it, hope you find some peace in your life.
TheNobleLion
TheNobleLionLv14

You did not give examples of events at all, just saying "at chapter xyz", the MC is smart. Ok, but how? Him predicting the enemy's moves means nothing to me. If the enemy has 2 IQ and MC has 30 IQ, then obviously the MC can predict their moves. It does not mean he's smart. If a specific instance does not exist, which as you keep saying, "CLEARLY" displays MCs wit, I might be willing to accept that but you continue to give me bulls**t. It's also fine to say that you can't be bothered to find specific examples but instead you only write gibberish.

Anime_World_6808:it is very very obvious that he is clearly smart because after few hundred chapters... maybe like 300 after that he goes out the palace and after 500 or 600 chapter and you can CLEARLY see mc is smart, deducting your opponent plan with few hints, confusing enemies (who are very smart btw) and many more if you read enough. And you do not need to exgeriate by saying 3000 chapters after because if you have enough brain you can CLEARLY see mc is smart even when he didn't go outside the palace inexperienced yes but smart, mc will get his experience after he leaves the palace, so there you go your PROOF and if this still isn't enough you can read the novel.....
TheNobleLion
TheNobleLionLv14

You write like a third grader. If anyone here is a child, it's you.

Anime_World_6808:Well that clearly is very rude, I like calling people with names when they deserve it you clearly are a dumb person if you don't realise that because saying mc is dumb in this novel is saying deku is a bad mc without knowing him fully or watching the show fully, and I don't a rush or excited by saying dumb to a dumb person or to childrens (who are clearly dumb) which you clearly are.*sigh~* I guess this is the internet which CLEARLY is full of dumb people like you.
Anime_World_6808
Anime_World_6808Lv4

and like i said inexpirensed, but i do agree he was a bit of an idiot with that decision but it is perfectly resonable with his inexpirence with the system but hay look at him like naruto was a idiot at first but in boruto...

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Battleform
BattleformLv5

yeah nvm, I already reached the chapter where the author said that the mc's character wouldn't change, he'll continue to be witty and chaotic, I'm already skipping some dialogues of the characters here, it's just too hard to read those when the mc keeps humiliating himself.

Anime_World_6808:and like i said inexpirensed, but i do agree he was a bit of an idiot with that decision but it is perfectly resonable with his inexpirence with the system but hay look at him like naruto was a idiot at first but in boruto...
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