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_MR_FOOL_
_MR_FOOL_Lv14yr
2021-02-20 01:17

its good but the mc is kinda dumb but you might enjoy it if your willing to kill a few brain cells and i personally think the martial arts tournament arc has been a little too stretched out for its own good

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_MR_FOOL_
_MR_FOOL_Lv1

update: i read till ch 43 and dropped it it is trash

MalDee_DeeMal
MalDee_DeeMalLv3

where did you read the extra chapters bro

MalDee_DeeMal
MalDee_DeeMalLv3

i need a link lol

_MR_FOOL_:update: i read till ch 43 and dropped it it is trash
IAwardRewards
IAwardRewardsLv11

I dropped it around chapter 10

_MR_FOOL_:update: i read till ch 43 and dropped it it is trash
_MR_FOOL_
_MR_FOOL_Lv1

its on mtl

MalDee_DeeMal:where did you read the extra chapters bro
MILARCH
MILARCHLv13

that was fast haha

_MR_FOOL_:update: i read till ch 43 and dropped it it is trash
dragonNEET2567
dragonNEET2567Lv6

The ideas which the novels are started are good but the execution is killing us and if there are novels with good idea and execution it won't get selected.

_MR_FOOL_:update: i read till ch 43 and dropped it it is trash
Orginal_Panda
Orginal_PandaLv5

what happend after 40

_MR_FOOL_:update: i read till ch 43 and dropped it it is trash
ThanatosGreekGod
ThanatosGreekGodLv14

yeah i guessed via the summary that this will be bad maybe alright negoning but it wont be good dragged out

_MR_FOOL_:update: i read till ch 43 and dropped it it is trash
MILARCH
MILARCHLv13

yeah, this get picked.

dragonNEET2567:The ideas which the novels are started are good but the execution is killing us and if there are novels with good idea and execution it won't get selected.
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Sleeping_Fox_UwU
Sleeping_Fox_UwULv4

bruh even if you kill your brain cells it will still be worse than trash...

Ajaxian
AjaxianLv15

Ya man, literally the best piece of writing I've ever read in my entire life is https://***.webnovel.com/book/15247584006719305/Worlds'-Apocalypse-Online but it's still ranked so low (doesn't help it was translated externally for 700 chaps to start). Everything else I read seems like trash now ^-^

dragonNEET2567:The ideas which the novels are started are good but the execution is killing us and if there are novels with good idea and execution it won't get selected.
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Daoist_Red_Reads
Daoist_Red_ReadsLv4

I left the novel when it was around the time he gone to a third world(I now have blurry memories of this novel.) I would rate it a 3.7. The beginning is good but as the story progresses it becomes problematic. Problems that should have been solved better(cause mc was supposed to be experienced and smart or just experienced) was done much worse. The world building just could not decide on what it wanted to be, it decides to be vague instead just so it could add stuff when it feels like it. The planet's name, the one where he was born in, was never mentioned until like hundreds of chapters later when it made itself look like it was a new planet not called earth without any country from earth. China was fine but they mentioned earth which really just messes with it. The gimmicks it introduces were just random but I guess they were just doing a comedy so it gets a pass. If not for the futuristic setting along with another world gaming, I think this would be the standard fun wuxia novel where the mc fights to fight with some witty plays. I am really not sure if it became better since I left around the time he gone to a third world (some sort of cultivation world).

Ajaxian:Ya man, literally the best piece of writing I've ever read in my entire life is https://***.webnovel.com/book/15247584006719305/Worlds'-Apocalypse-Online but it's still ranked so low (doesn't help it was translated externally for 700 chaps to start). Everything else I read seems like trash now ^-^
farmer_with_dimple
farmer_with_dimpleLv11

hey you should read the dark system in my opinion it's good😁😁 Atleast better than this.

_MR_FOOL_:update: i read till ch 43 and dropped it it is trash
farmer_with_dimple
farmer_with_dimpleLv11

hey you should read the dark system. in my opinion it's good😁😁 At least better than this

IAwardRewards:I dropped it around chapter 10
farmer_with_dimple
farmer_with_dimpleLv11

read the dark system. good idea, it's in its working phases. so far it's good Atleast better than this😁😁

dragonNEET2567:The ideas which the novels are started are good but the execution is killing us and if there are novels with good idea and execution it won't get selected.
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FrostTheAlbino
FrostTheAlbinoLv12

Did not delete mine, I think yours was removed because it violated Webnovels t&c.

farmer_with_dimple:hey you should read the dark system in my opinion it's good😁😁 Atleast better than this.
AGuyWhoReadsStuff
AGuyWhoReadsStuffLv4

Was going to check it out but then realized you were the author of that novel.

farmer_with_dimple:read the dark system. good idea, it's in its working phases. so far it's good Atleast better than this😁😁
farmer_with_dimple
farmer_with_dimpleLv11

don't be so cruel but your loss. 😇

AGuyWhoReadsStuff:Was going to check it out but then realized you were the author of that novel.
WoofWoof
WoofWoofLv6

do they have phones? Science? Alternative energy source for their gadgets like a hologram? If none of those are present, where did you dream up a futuristic setting?

Daoist_Red_Reads:I left the novel when it was around the time he gone to a third world(I now have blurry memories of this novel.) I would rate it a 3.7. The beginning is good but as the story progresses it becomes problematic. Problems that should have been solved better(cause mc was supposed to be experienced and smart or just experienced) was done much worse. The world building just could not decide on what it wanted to be, it decides to be vague instead just so it could add stuff when it feels like it. The planet's name, the one where he was born in, was never mentioned until like hundreds of chapters later when it made itself look like it was a new planet not called earth without any country from earth. China was fine but they mentioned earth which really just messes with it. The gimmicks it introduces were just random but I guess they were just doing a comedy so it gets a pass. If not for the futuristic setting along with another world gaming, I think this would be the standard fun wuxia novel where the mc fights to fight with some witty plays. I am really not sure if it became better since I left around the time he gone to a third world (some sort of cultivation world).
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