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Zenithlr
ZenithlrLv43yr
2021-03-14 22:30

You limit the abilities of the mc. Like wtf, why did you even do that?? He is ridiculously strong but you slowed down his growth in game by 90%. You didn't even spare his experience acquisition. You made one of the richest person on the planet mc's slave but you can't even make the mc ride a care to school?? Creativeness man. Do you know that word? Be creative but don't exaggerate it. Dropping it.

Ancient Vampire in a Modern World

TheUnknownEntity
4.0
115 Chs

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TheUnknownEntity
TheUnknownEntityAuthor

creativeness? what's that? Imma search it to google...

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SB_Moon
SB_MoonLv13

(⌐■-■)

TheUnknownEntity:creativeness? what's that? Imma search it to google...
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Mortifer
MortiferLv14

Oof, found a reason not to read the novel.

TheUnknownEntity:creativeness? what's that? Imma search it to google...
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God awful writing quality. The story itself is pretty much written by a child. The author is tunneling the story and not really expanding on the world too much. There are tons of mistakes that are so easy to spot that it makes reading it hard.

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totoro24th
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I GET IT!! I GET IT!! HAHAHA I think I get it... The biggest misunderstanding of all haha!! I won't spoil anymore. I almost drop this book because of it but then, haha. The author doesn't want to explain it so I won't spoil anymore.. This is already my second review lol. But the grammar still need improvement though. Hope this won't drop.

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AngstR
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Who the hell is Keiji!?... Isn't the mc name Vlad and Scott?... I don't mind about those naming sense(Klyzer and the other)..... Well the plot is good at least(Even thought he was supposed to be old monster but those cliche... whatever).. also the heroine development was too hastened... Overall it's good... just good no more or less... In my personal opinion

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Nomed_Forcraziness
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............................................................................. Anyo! Nice book Bro! I love it! though the first chapters were boring. But later it was nice. Salamat Sayo for your Hard work. Hoping for more in the future.

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Havency_Taylor
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The grammar is some of the worst I’ve ever read and I’m hoping it eventually gets better. The story has great potential, however in the first two chapters it’s completely garbage.

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vampireKun
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This is a gem please don't drop soon. I like his style and aahhhh...... Nevermind!!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Anonymous_Reo
Anonymous_ReoLv3

Writing quality could do with a bit of work, especially with punctuation marks and all. Overall nice one hopefully, it doesn't get dropped.

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Nanak_Khazanewala
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Reveal spoiler

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timepiece94
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I'm sorry I really tried I really really tried to read this but it's just so bad work on grammar a little get your story straight then I'll start reading again

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MrFalan
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Learn the diffrence between He and she FFS I get that sentence can be wrong grammer can be misleading but I am on ch 30 there is still same mistake annoying AF anyway thank for the effort

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