Item: Ancient Vampire in a Modern World
Rating: 1.6
Author: Dayside

DaysideLv123yr

2021-02-10 10:58

God awful writing quality. The story itself is pretty much written by a child. The author is tunneling the story and not really expanding on the world too much. There are tons of mistakes that are so easy to spot that it makes reading it hard.

Ancient Vampire in a Modern World

TheUnknownEntity

4.0

115 Chs

Liked by 24 people

Replies7

Kazu_maLv3

You think author doesn't know that? well most do but some don't. In this case, I don't know (lol) but I pretty sure the author will try to improve the writing in the future. For now, it's just the beginning of the story.

3yr

Venerable_LinfengLv11

Idk too man, but if the author is really just a child, then I ain’t going to expect anything much.

3yr

Ujju_HellLv2

aren't you the author?

Venerable_Linfeng:Idk too man, but if the author is really just a child, then I ain’t going to expect anything much.

3yr

Venerable_LinfengLv11

Haha, yeah I’m an author but not this book’s author.

Ujju_Hell:aren't you the author?

3yr

Venerable_LinfengLv11

Well, then I’ll expect something from you.

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3yr

TheUnknownEntityAuthor

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3yr

Wondering_ReaderLv3

Ah i like your novels

Venerable_Linfeng:Idk too man, but if the author is really just a child, then I ain’t going to expect anything much.

3yr

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totoro24thLv3

I GET IT!! I GET IT!! HAHAHA I think I get it... The biggest misunderstanding of all haha!! I won't spoil anymore. I almost drop this book because of it but then, haha. The author doesn't want to explain it so I won't spoil anymore.. This is already my second review lol. But the grammar still need improvement though. Hope this won't drop.

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AngstRLv1

Who the hell is Keiji!?... Isn't the mc name Vlad and Scott?... I don't mind about those naming sense(Klyzer and the other)..... Well the plot is good at least(Even thought he was supposed to be old monster but those cliche... whatever).. also the heroine development was too hastened... Overall it's good... just good no more or less... In my personal opinion

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Nomed_ForcrazinessLv2

............................................................................. Anyo! Nice book Bro! I love it! though the first chapters were boring. But later it was nice. Salamat Sayo for your Hard work. Hoping for more in the future.

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Havency_TaylorLv11

The grammar is some of the worst I’ve ever read and I’m hoping it eventually gets better. The story has great potential, however in the first two chapters it’s completely garbage.

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vampireKunLv2

This is a gem please don't drop soon. I like his style and aahhhh...... Nevermind!!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Anonymous_ReoLv3

Writing quality could do with a bit of work, especially with punctuation marks and all. Overall nice one hopefully, it doesn't get dropped.

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Nanak_KhazanewalaLv2

Reveal spoiler

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timepiece94Lv14

I'm sorry I really tried I really really tried to read this but it's just so bad work on grammar a little get your story straight then I'll start reading again

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MrFalanLv14

Learn the diffrence between He and she FFS I get that sentence can be wrong grammer can be misleading but I am on ch 30 there is still same mistake annoying AF anyway thank for the effort

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