I know this is just a translated fanfic, but I will review it anyways. This is just a cultivation novel in the form of a dragon ball fanfic. The description got my hopes up, but ultimately I was dissapointed. A random saiyan girl somehow gets just as strong as the MC somehow, and the girl just follows him aroung which feels forced. I strongly dislike hoe at first the MC didnt like her and boom after a couple months he likes her. She is probably going to be the love interest which is stupid, and a lot of things and events are forced. Im just disspointed. I gave 2 stars for the writing because the translation was ok.

Excellent work. Although it is filled with Chinese Names and other matters, The story is great and Entertaining to read. In my personal opinion it's a great story with greater potential. Keep up the Excellent Work.

I remember this novel, I love this fanfiction! 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 .

Just by reading 3 chaps I can tell why you didn't edit it before posting , I mean I am literally having a headache rightnow just by reading .. I don't know If you had tried to edit it I can't really imagine the pain you would have felt..

I haven't read past the first 20 chapters, But what I see so far is just total butchering of the character names, caveman talk and sentences that make no sense also random chinese characters. Just how irresponsible and lazy do you have to be!?

Everything is trash. This FanFiction was good at the first 15 chapters but right after that the fanfic took a real turn. Matter of fact this cant even be called a fanfic after that point. This fanfic turned into a Cultivation novel. Everyone in the entire story acts like those people from Xianxia and Xianxua novels. The MC is like a typical chinese novel mc and the main girl act like those cold beauty senior sister.

MC is a Saiyan, but not only he, but the female support character don't hold Saiyan names, instead they are Chinese, and stupid to pronounce in English. I didn't get very far before the fic began to feel repetitive to other fics I've read about Dragon Ball. I.E. Trains on Vegeta for a few years, gets sent to a planet higher than expected, beats planet, goes to earth, trains, goes BACK to the death trap that is planet Vegeta, blah blah blah. You get the idea. So I'm dropping here

Yeah its garbage. This is not a Dragon Ball fanfic it's a cultivation novel down to last trope. Don't waste brain cells and time here. 👎👎👎

Why didn't you make him OP ***HHHYYYYY did you do this to me? Tell me why did you have to do this give me one good reason. ______________________________________________________________________________

Statistically, this book would be good I cannot lie its a nice story very well translated, I like how to book moves forward but if I where to give a real personal review on how it is so far...id say a 3 star rating. The female main character is annoying and seems so forced how she behaves around the MC. If she died the story wouldn't be affected and id quite like to see it happen. The author decides to change it to a cultivation web novel and changes ki to qi, training to cultivation like why? its a fucking dragon ball fan fictions ffs. uses BS wuxia knowledge honestly a real disappointment. I enjoy the story but these things are very annoying