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Cheeky_Monkey
Cheeky_MonkeyLv54yr
2020-12-29 13:34

I haven't read past the first 20 chapters, But what I see so far is just total butchering of the character names, caveman talk and sentences that make no sense also random chinese characters. Just how irresponsible and lazy do you have to be!?

The Strongest Legend of Dragon Ball (Maple Leaf Connection, 枫叶缀)

EternalDragonO0
4.0
614 Chs

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Cheeky_Monkey
Cheeky_MonkeyLv5

Oh wait I didn't see the rewrite. But still, too late. Also the MC is dumb and the author butchered it with Xianxia logic, so he did a lot of mistakes and bad decisions that would absolutely piss off a knowledgeable DBZ fan. Which was me, I mean WHY WOULD YOU CUT OFF A TAIL BECAUSE OF THIS SO-CALLED UNSTABLE FACTOR?!!?!? It can be controlled which was show cased by vegeta and it's pretty much controllable from what the MC said.

4yr
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Maxfun3
Maxfun3Lv14

You guys don’t know this a translation. I read this on a machine translation site years ago

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Just by reading 3 chaps I can tell why you didn't edit it before posting , I mean I am literally having a headache rightnow just by reading .. I don't know If you had tried to edit it I can't really imagine the pain you would have felt..

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PathOfGod
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MC is a Saiyan, but not only he, but the female support character don't hold Saiyan names, instead they are Chinese, and stupid to pronounce in English. I didn't get very far before the fic began to feel repetitive to other fics I've read about Dragon Ball. I.E. Trains on Vegeta for a few years, gets sent to a planet higher than expected, beats planet, goes to earth, trains, goes BACK to the death trap that is planet Vegeta, blah blah blah. You get the idea. So I'm dropping here

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Lethal_Drinker
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Yeah its garbage. This is not a Dragon Ball fanfic it's a cultivation novel down to last trope. Don't waste brain cells and time here. 👎👎👎

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Why didn't you make him OP ***HHHYYYYY did you do this to me? Tell me why did you have to do this give me one good reason. ______________________________________________________________________________

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