this story is nothing more than hentai in form of fiction book and the quality is bit disappointing... MC is nothing more then a horny dog that can't think with his head... and the story narration is bit mixed in perspective of different views that confuses me a lot and description or character's of women in this fic are nothing more than vase role... my suggestion: just drop this fic or don't read it by wasting ur time..
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I think the biggest problem is the grammar, so i don't know what you mean with "hentai". Nothing remotely perverted even happened in the ff so far, so what's the problem?
wtf.....
Did you even read this fanfiction?
yeah ....and thus is my rating prove of it...
Clearly there's no such thing as him being a horny dog in the fanfic happened yet, you must be watching hentai and mistook it for this fanfic, He's also controlling his Negative buff [Lust] by transforming into his Overlord form (Spoiler perhaps?) so you must be high or smth dude
I don't know if you read it or just scrolled through it quickly
why is this pinned? lol
thanks .I don't wanna waste my time on this kind of idiotic novel
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for readers who love fanfiction with "culture" content I must say this review is pure bullshit, I read until chapter 12 and there is nothing remotely "*****" content warning +18 is pure bullshit
It will happen in the future, it's obvious with the [Lust] curse.
bro, are you talking stupid, where does it come from that the MC is a horny guy? If you want a more serious story go read the original novel and don't talk nonsense, although this novel is not a big deal, it is not as if they promised you something different in the description since the author put the labels of r-18 and the harem
I too thought the same
Mr.gyal_san I personally think there is something wrong with your head, really are you gay or something?? The girls in the Overlord are other world beauties and there is Albedo too. She is a succubus and having a beauty in love and admire you the most is ideal wife/girlfriend is the dream of every man. You said the novel is a horny dog but the mc didn't do anything at least till now. As for me, this is the best overlord fanfic I have read. And having decent updates is really good. for god sake before reading a fanfic/novel read the tags are carefully (especially to "gyal_san") the grammar is decent too and the author is improving his writing quality for every chapter. ----- For gyal_san: Are jealous or something for his work. Yeah may that is the reason.
something is wrong with your head man. Go check a doctor.
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good thing I red the replies, if I didn't I would've missed a Overlord fic😬
with all due respect @gyal_san 《Fu'ck off》
Like, WTF are you talking about. You have to have read a completely different novel, and from the Overlord Fan fictions I tumbled my way into, this is one of the better ones. God bless there is no full on orgy in the first 15 chapters, it really does have a nice build up, even that he took Lubusregina and Naberal with him on the excursion to E-Rantel is a new spin on the story, that I haven't seen done before. So kudos and heads up this has the potential to be 'more' than just a smut fiction.
That guy(the one who made the review), I think his parent don't love him so he is ranting in webnovel using his shitty tiny brain!!
