Review Detail of TaintedMetal in At Last I Found You In My World

I'll give credit to the author for uploading multiple chapters within a day it seems. IN addition, I can see that this novel is doing what it can to present an interesting and cohesive storyline. The ideas are here, although there needs to be some revisions for some parts of the story, which have telling instead of showing. In addition there isn't much to say about the characters or the setting of the novel itself, but I suppose they will be explored later on. Keep on writing author. It's best you double check on your structure of the novel, how sentences flow. Maybe take your time on the chapters and their respective uploads. Good luck.