Wow. The writing is so intricate and well done! I love how the emotions and feelings or thoughts are very well written and mature. A small suggestion would be to break up the long paragraphs into smaller ones so the reader can gobble it up faster and it's somehow easier to follow when it's broken up.. But the story Is amazing and has great potential. Leon is a capturing main character and I can see you will do good things with this book! Well done and Good luck author!
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