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Very interesting story! The writing is very nice to read and the plot is also super interesting. I'm excited for potential romances and readers will be hooked! Good luck[img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
Really liked this story😊 The writing might have had minor errors but that's totally okay and you can definitely improve. The synopsis and first chapter is very interesting and readers will be hooked. good luck author!!!
Oh my god I'm really falling behind on the editing aspect it's really passing over my head will fix it
Honestly speaking, your writing is very mature and detailed. I was very impressed with each description and dialogue it was so good. The mystery element is good!![img=recommend] Just when I thought A was the one, something makes me feel otherwise but I'm wrong again and it's a cycle that's interesting. I'm overall very impressed with how mature your writing and story flow is!! Good luck t.h
A really interesting book for sure! I love the author of the book LOL it brings a really lighthearted feeling to the story and I really loved it. I immediately knew I would end up simping for Jihoon haha. Good luck author keep it up😊[img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
Ah ok I think I corrected that bit thank you
Ohh not even when it's a dialogue?
It's a really interesting and capturing plot. I love how the first chapter is very emotion driven and is filled with angst which is really fun! I noticed a few error in tenses but as a fellow author I get it lol, we make mistakes. Overall it's very interesting good luck![img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I really love this book! The synopsis is very capturing and writing style is very good! Readers wont be disappointed by this and the hype is well deserved! Good work author!
thank you I have edited all your corrections!😊
ahh ok thank you!