Review Detail of star_dreamer in Apotheosis.

This story is a good read. The plot is good and unique, and the characters are all very realistic. There are a few grammatical mistakes that can be overlooked but correcting them will certainly bring more fluency to the language of the story. Try to divide long paras in shorter ones so its easier and more convenient for the reader. This story has got great potential and with a few minor tweaks it can get really great!