Review Detail of PBOM2004 in The Ancient Monster

This is a story about an Evil MC so don't expect that MC to follow the moral guidelines of Humanity. The MC still has the flaws of being a human and if you want to know this would be her flaws. -Underestimating her enemies(Underestimating enemies is a bad thing) -Being Greedy(Too much greed would be turn into punishment) -Leaving a lot of Mess(Which would result of her enemies being born, And this enemies could be called the heroes) -Arrogant(I like to think that she is arrogant) -Selfish(She is Selfish, She ate a lot of fish without giving anyone)jk -Psychopath(The Makings of a psycho) -Evil(Evil) This flaws would slowly disappear as time passes in the story probably due to experience. As this is the primordial world which is full of things that is considered nonsense. The MC would have to adapt and during her time as a weak monster would be her most Evil time. [I am Shameless for Reviewing myself] I would also like you to report all misspellings so that I would able to fix it.