Review Detail of AarconReix in The Epic of Leviathan
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I'll give this ff a full 25 stars, and yeah this is a serious review as I don't want to lower myself to the point that I'm just ass licking. I like the story, the background, the flow. Yeah there are some things that needs to be addressed, like the MC's family which, for me, felt like left alon after getting that protection. For ROB's sake, their child was kidnapped by a villain boy band and they doesn't even have a single line in the chapter, well yeah, a little nitpicky but that's still a family that grew on me as a reader. The world building is awesome, the timeline is almost the same, almost but not completely same. The plot, the power scaling, and the romance, which are the things that almost always ticked off the readers, are awesome for me. The plot moves in accordance with what the past chapters want it to be, it leads a single coherent story just like a river flowing from a high place to the ocean, a single road forward. The power scaling is good, too good to be honest, he(MC) doesn't have that 'sudden power-up because he's injured/in danger or whatnot' bullsht. He is FUCKING learning everything from the basics, yeah he has the knowledge of the magneto(comics/movies)of what he can do, but the mc used that knowledge to further the power, hell he even learned electro magnetism for crying out loud just to fight AFO. The there is the romance, or harem if you want. I think it's exceptional, yeah yeah I know, the setting with Momo was so cliche, but I like it. You know the feeling of that? that you know it's so cliche that you can predict what happen? but still anticipate it? yeah that's what I felt, and when the relationship is out, ofcourse the MOST cliche thing that should happen was that Momo's family was against it righ? noo they are even encouraging it, that minor twist on the cliche, although still cliche, but a welcome one for me. so I'll stop this review here because I FUCKING exceeded most authors' word counts just for the review. But all in all, this story is not perfect, but I can guarantee with all my years using this app and reading different stories that this fic is a worthy one to read. PEACE!
The Epic of Leviathan
InGlorious
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Naahh it's good, just don't let mc forget his family for motivation purposes. and yeah, Thanks for writing a great work such as this
InGlorious:Thanks very much appreciated, I will trybto fix the stuff you said.
InGlorious:Thanks very much appreciated, I will trybto fix the stuff you said.
AarconReix:ᴬⁿᵈ ᶜᵃⁿ ʸᵒᵘ ᵖˡᵉᵃˢᵉ ᵃᵈᵈ ᵃ ˡᶦᵗᵗˡᵉ ᵐᵒʳᵉ ˡᵉᵐᵒⁿˢ, ˡᶦᵏᵉ ² ᵉᵛᵉʳʸ ʷᵒʳˡᵈˀˀ ᴴᵉʰᵉʰᵉʰ
He isn't either of them. You might call the MC borderline evil but he isn't a villain. He simply lacks a moral compass and won't shy away from doing anything necessary to reach his goals
Yamiya:Is he anti-hero or hero i dont mind Either way Im just asking
InGlorious:Thanks very much appreciated, I will trybto fix the stuff you said.
tbh i had what most consider a ruined childhood(altho i personally dont consider it so) since i didnt watch harry potter(dbz was and is still my life after all) so can u tell me if i can skip the harry potter arc since i dont really wanna read it but wanna read the rest. Basically i am asking if its fine to skip the harry potter arc or not altho i might give it a try too since i have nothing except mtl novel to read and i dont wanna kill my braincells rn...
InGlorious:It will ruin the fun if you haven't read the fanfic
You can skip it if you want. There is nothing major in that arc the except the magical spells they have learned
Dark_Magma:tbh i had what most consider a ruined childhood(altho i personally dont consider it so) since i didnt watch harry potter(dbz was and is still my life after all) so can u tell me if i can skip the harry potter arc since i dont really wanna read it but wanna read the rest. Basically i am asking if its fine to skip the harry potter arc or not altho i might give it a try too since i have nothing except mtl novel to read and i dont wanna kill my braincells rn...
ugh kinda late since when i didnt receive an answer i took it as a yes... and i am also at the part of christmas at nemuri's friend tonks... well it was... unique... i mean the arc of hp like there is action and the dark atmosphere but the harem, magic, op and bit of comedy makes it more tolerable and nice... like a change since most harem world travels always have this serious vibe on them even when mc's relax while here altho he works hard at least he aint super stressed... so yeah i guess this will be the first hp story i will ever experience and it was good. Didnt disappoint so keep it up👍
InGlorious:You can skip it if you want. There is nothing major in that arc the except the magical spells they have learned
Blasphemous! How dare u say DXD worse than avatar... sigh... uncultured swine... Oppais are the blessings of God to all the cultured men on earth... Learn and repent 😌
8Mysterious8:why DXD Avatar world is better
AarconReix:Naahh it's good, just don't let mc forget his family for motivation purposes. and yeah, Thanks for writing a great work such as this
