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ThisNovelSucksBro
ThisNovelSucksBroLv32yr
2022-04-16 14:00

First of all before we get into this short review I want to say that despite my complaints that I'm sure you'll see a lot of, this author is incredible alongside his writing (Just because I started disliking it doesn't mean you shouldn't give it a try yourself). I highly recommend you check his other novels out AND this one! (No major plot spoilers in the review don't worry: unless you count the world names as such) -- The novel begins fairly cliche however it does so in a way that keeps you entertained the characters are as true to themselves as can be (with exceptions) and all harem members mesh well with both the plot and actual harem its self. This keeps up for the first few worlds until finally we reach the MCU, here is where everything begins to crack which will become much more apparent on the final world (Highschool DXD) beginning with the introduction of a certain cosmic entity and their relation (familial) we get a whole new possible subplot which will be left unexplored for the remainder of the novel and instead continue to follow the X-Men in what could possibly be the most boring short arc in the history of arcs from the two specific harem additions who joined in an "oh okay guess you can join" kinda way to the complete lack of world building around the world and his (MC) affects on it. Finally we move onto the last world (Highschool DxD). Now honestly I refuse to waste my time writing about this arc so I'll recommend you pick any of the last 30 or so chapters from the novel and try get through it without skipping. It's evident (and has been said) by this point the author has lost all motivation for the novel, they claimed it was due to the complaints about it being too detailed and whilst I do agree with what the people complaining were saying for the most part, I think it had a lot more to do with the fact that the entire last arc felt like filler and not the good type. From the random added characters that nobody cares about with no affect on the story to our MC's complete lack of involvement everything became a dumpster fire, the author knew what he wanted to lead up to but did it in the worst way I've ever seen and by then he'd given up so we didn't even get the good finale. (Which is justified they said they wanted to quickly wrap the novel up due to them not enjoying it) ---- MY opinion Pros and Cons Below. Pros: A good first few arcs that are very entertaining // Mostly well done harem they all work together well and make the novel more enjoyable // Authors writing and imagination is pretty good they know what they want just not exactly how to get there // Cons: Yuri in the harem // Seemed to be a lack of thought put into the last two worlds // Shares an omniverse with their other novel (the black summoner) // rushed ending // inability to expand on good plots but drag out bad ones // ---------- Again, this is only my opinion so don't shy away from giving the novel a try yourself. As soon as you get to the Highschool DxD world save yourself the brain damage and just skip but before that? Go crazy. Thank you author for such an enjoyable novel!

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lucasnobb
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to no MCU e dropei tipo antes tava legal mais foi meio arastado , apresado e sem muito desenvolvimento, a adição de tantas no grupo dele foi um como se ele quisesse preencher a lacuna so porque a luna fez a previsão, devo dizer que eu não gostei de simplemente chegar no novo mundo e suas namoradas ganhar poder, e o coisa da entidade cômica, e ele simplemente pular a introdução da tempestade no grupo deles foi a gota da água para ele para, achei ele meio que sem personalidade, e meio que tudo se baseava vou sair com algumas da minhas garotas e destruir coisas que podem me ameaçar

ThisNovelSucksBro
ThisNovelSucksBroLv3

What you said may have some merit to it but I don't speak your language so I guess I'll never know.

lucasnobb:to no MCU e dropei tipo antes tava legal mais foi meio arastado , apresado e sem muito desenvolvimento, a adição de tantas no grupo dele foi um como se ele quisesse preencher a lacuna so porque a luna fez a previsão, devo dizer que eu não gostei de simplemente chegar no novo mundo e suas namoradas ganhar poder, e o coisa da entidade cômica, e ele simplemente pular a introdução da tempestade no grupo deles foi a gota da água para ele para, achei ele meio que sem personalidade, e meio que tudo se baseava vou sair com algumas da minhas garotas e destruir coisas que podem me ameaçar
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I just read a couple of the reviews and I understand their complaints. But I do gotta disagree a little in some points for those who are interested in reading. I saw some reviews that said that mc will only follow Canon(though that isn't always bad if done correctly) and while that is true for the beginning, he was mainly doing it to get in touch with all for one. It's his whole mission in the Mha world. So if he were to completely mess up plot he wouldn't have a clue as to when/where he could find All for one. The moment he meets All for one he makes big changes to the plot. Second is that he is a dog for the Yaoyorozu family and a dog for Momo and... no? I mean not really. His mom works for the Yaoyorozu so he lives in one of their houses. And when the Yaoyorozu discover that he has a potentially strong quirk they offer to pay for his tuition. Wouldn't you be the slightest bit thankful for someone who is giving you a house and an education basically free. I don't know how far into the story the review was made but early in the story he acts as somewhat of a bodyguard for Momo but. They go to the same school, live in the same house(or right next to each other),, train together, play together... Wouldn't it make sense to make someone who spends most his time with her to somewhat bodyguard Momo? I mean at that time they are friends and friends lookout for friends. And last thing is about Magnetos powers. He slowly begins to learn how to use more of Magnetos abilities. He isn't planning to lift bridges and lift cities off the ground using his powers like Magneto. But, he isn't magneto, he isn't supposed to be a "bad guy". He will kill no problem but he isn't going to go and kill every non quirk user or something like that. He uses iron sand to fight because that is less destructive than pulling beams out of a building. That's pretty much all. I saw the bad reviews at the top and decided to write this. I understand if you disagree, like every other story this one isn't perfect but in my opinion I think it's good and at least worth a shot. writing quality 5, I usually use the listen feature so I can "read" stories while working/cleaning but from listening to it the grammar seems good(you can really hear bad spelling mistakes ) Story development 5 pretty good so far, latest chapters are the biggest changes from Canon so gotta wait to see what changes that'll bring character design 4 I would say this one is mainly a preference standpoint, though I wouldn't say the character is bad. updating stability 5 so far updates almost daily and more than one chapter. world background 5 it's My hero academia

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